Vadson,
As mentioned in the original post, I'm not aiming to be 100% perfect - if someone can look at it and say "It's a Golf", it's good enough for me. The wire is also unfortunately very messy in places, and not easy to tweak - I'm sure this is something that will be remedied with experience and future models.
Since this is my first poly car, I am trying to learn the tools rather that create an exact replica, as it's only for personal use.
I would like to try and make you happy though
Do you mean the angle where the grille meets the side fender, or the angle between the bonnet (hood) and the bumper?