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Old 10-07-2007
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Hey, sweet DC2 mate, here's a little bit of criticism for you.

1. You're missing the window rubbers and the door handles.

2. I'm just being picky but the corners of your signals are a bit too sharp.

3. The bottom lip is supposed to be an "add-on" though you made it look like a seam. Just try extending the top edge down and make it seem like a lip.
Try this; http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedi...56/Integra.jpg

4. There's a hard groove on the bonnet, but yours doesn't seem to have it.
http://www.dragtimes.com/images/9418...ra-Integra.jpg

5. The rear bumper needs some chamfers on the upper end.

6. If you're making the Type R then you will notice that the bumper is different around the headlights. You will notice in the picture of the white Integra in number 3.

7. Also, if you're going for a Type R, the rear taillights need to angle down more towards the middle

8. I don't mean to be rude but, GET RID OF THE MASSIVE HUMP ON THE ROOF! haha.

I'll try to spot more when I have some time.

If you were going for a simple tuned look (assuming by having the Spoon wheels) how come you didn't make like a Mugen front lip for it? Would've just set it off nicely, because it looks a bit plain for now.

Very nice modelling pal, I look forward to seeing some progression.
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