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Old 01-27-2008
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It's an excellent start to me. I'm sure it's your first wip here but not your first project ever. The mesh looks pretty clean, please post unsmoothed screencap to make it sure. Also, a clay can be useful.

I've a little doubt about accuracy of the foglight : the bulge in the bumper looks too small to me. Check this refpic please : http://news-images.caradisiac.com/IM...-megane-rs.jpg

Also, almost all your edges are too sharp : please take the edge on side of hood as an example on the same refpic.

Last critic from me, the little edge of the hood bordering the headlight is just a bit too long.

Keep us updated, it's a really nice choice of car !
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