Thread: F-14 Tomcat
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Old 05-14-2008
Silent1Unknown Silent1Unknown is offline
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I like it, it looks good.


It could improve on a few things...

-The 2 flying F-14's look a bit dull and too cartoony. Move them a bit farther back, maybe add some blur.
-The 2 F-14's sitting in the background, look like they're hovering over the ground. I think you'll have to do something about their shadows.
-The asphault looks OK from a distance, but looks a bit...liquidy...up close (near the bottom of the pic).
-The picture could look a bit more dynamic if the center F-14 was racing along the runway. Again, maybe some (motion) blurring effects can fix this.
-Try a different lens flare effect for the sun.

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