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Old 08-24-2006
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My LR Defender!

this is my first-creation-ever with my 3dsmax! I know there are some bugs (like the so-hated reflection of the filter on the glass...), but I started to model only 1 month ago..
Comments are welcome, but please don't be too rude... I'm a novice...

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Old 08-24-2006
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Great first post, welcome!
I think you've done really well. The model looks good, plenty of detail, love that winch!
As for comments - Perhaps you could improve the tyre-tread, the rims look a bit small, add seats etc so it has an interior, improve the headlight material and also change the camera angle to show off your model a bit better. I'm making positive suggestions, I'm not trying to criticise your good work. It's a great model and I can't wait to see more from you
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thanks garethgeezer! I promise, in the next week I'm going to make some new screenshots and I'll begin to model the interior..you know, I was so excited that I can't wait to post some images, even if the model wasn't completely finished. I'll learn to be more patient...
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great model man, i like it. If your a little impatient, why not post a WIP thread so you can show off your work before your final render, then people could help and crit about it as well.

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Old 08-25-2006
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great model and render!!!

i'd like to see some dirth on it
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First ever creation with Max, or first ever creation ever?? It sure looks as if you're quite experienced already 8o
Apart from the wheels and non-exsisting interior; I love it

And indeed, I love that winch too! Lovely work, you most probably will enjoy your stay here


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