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Old 03-25-2008
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Final Images Aston Martin V8 Vantage

After having lots of trouble the last days I finally finished my Aston Martin and got some more or less good images which I want to post with my Intership application tomorrow.

Please tell me what you think about it.
Its my first time modelling a car and the first time Im using Vray.

Im having this 7 images to choose from.
Which ones do you recommend to send with my application as reference which ones better put in the garbage?

I would really appreciate your opinions and advices

please excuse my bad english

regards
Marc
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Old 03-26-2008
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nobody has a opinion?
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Old 03-26-2008
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Show me a wire.
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Old 03-26-2008
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This is my my opinion so blow up about it....
The car istelf is very innacruate, its looks stretched and very bumpy all over, your renders are pretty poor quality and arent very well composited as well.
I would suggest you do some tutorials on modelling cars and start a new car and then post your work in the WIP forum so we can help you out if you have any problems or questions.
Sorry for being harsh but Im pretty sure thats why noone else has commented on your work.
Good luck with your Internship
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Old 03-26-2008
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I know its not good but thought it would be not so bad for doing this the first time.
Thanks anyway.
Im posting this only here because there was no time for the work in progress section cause I really have to get this application going.

So I think you would suggest not to put it in the application, right?
Im really disappointet because I thought it would be better then nothing. My other references are bigger projects, but also beginner stuff and not really good looking, so I think I may never get an intership

some other opinions?
put it in or keep it out of the application?
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Old 03-26-2008
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Personally i think if you have enough time try to make a new car and next time look at a tutorial on molding a car. And for your application nothing ventured nothing gained i would do it. I am very new to car drawing too and i found that i didn't get any results worth showing until after my 10th tutorial and 4th or 5th car. Please note i still cant draw a car like 1/2 the people on SM haha. If you can spend the time and practice and learn the software you will get better results. Keep practicing, and Good luck!

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yep everything that was need to be said has benn said nd i totally agree.. just practce and good luck


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Im missing the crying smilie here :-((
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Why are you sad?
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u just need to practise more like we, we practise a lot... dont be sad...

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