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Old 04-13-2008
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I think this is my best work so far, there are some little blips I didn't fix, if I have time to fix them I will later, but i think its good enough for now.

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the modelling looks very clean, no bumps or pinches that i can see, the rims should be larger, they look out of proportion, the overall materials could also be improved just a tad bit, but in general, the whole combination is quite impressive, good job!
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Yeah the refraction on the second image seems a little excessive but with those minor touch ups it goes a long way..,I personally like the third image for the lighting and reflection detail...brings out the car silhouettes a lot.
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Sharpen your bodylines. They look a bit toy-ish

Looking good otherwise, as mpfive said.


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Nice i will try guys thanks for the comments so far!

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Old 04-15-2008
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Technically speaking, it looks rather good : shapes are pretty smooth, no huge bump or pinch. Except the edges NightEye wrote about it's good.

And that's a good news for you for your next project. About accuracy, just be sure not to rush and to take every minute you need to check twice every detail on the car with the help of as many refpics as you can get.

When looking back at your Maserati, your skills upgrade is really impressive. Keep modeling !



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Thanks tom that means a lot to me.
I will do my best! 1/2 of that viper was a nurbs surface converted to poly, this Maserati has some very complex curves, i will be making a WIP soon. In order to make the curves look smooth i will be using sculpting nurbs curves from Alias, i hope the result is good.... I will probably have some work to show for it this weekend so i can make my first WIP on SMCars yay.

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