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Wondering H2 Desert drive.

Hi guys.

This is the latest renderings of my H2SUT,which I did a bit long ago. Done in 3ds Max 8.0 ,Vray and Photoshop 7.0.

Pls lemme know what'ya all think. All C&C welcome!
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wow takes u for ever to render , what cpu do u have?
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Nope. The scene is not at all heavy.Just the Basic Vray lighting!

I just have a 1.6gig P4 and a 512MB DDR! Took less than 2hrs to render.
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C'mon guys.Been almost a week since i hav posted this work.

Pls Comment on it guys!!
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Hmm the modleing looks good but the renders look a bit cartoonish and unrelaistic,try not to use the bloom effect it ruins it.
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The first pic looks alright. The second one looks a little plain. And everything else Catlin said.

You could also change the background. The smooth ground doesn't compliment the Hummer. Try a more rocky and cliffy scenery. Maybe the H2 can be climbing out of a hole.
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Yeah! U r right SILENT1UNKNOWN The desert is a piece of cake for h2!
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the second picture looks very toony

And, yes, change the underground

Otherwise looks very cool
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Idea is good but model needs work on materials.
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Originally Posted by Catlin View Post
Hmm the modleing looks good but the renders look a bit cartoonish and unrelaistic,try not to use the bloom effect it ruins it.
Iīm a noob, but I totally agree with Catlin on this one, thatīs the first thing I thougt.
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