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Old 05-15-2008
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sry guys was only able to render the front side but soon will put some other angles too
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Old 05-15-2008
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Seems to be very nicely modeled, but the render is much to dark.
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Old 05-16-2008
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I just dislike the paint, its strange, take a normal metallic paint, that should be way better.. anyways its too dark too. I love those rims, nice idea and accurate model


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I don't agree with celifighter about accuracy, I've noticed the following issues :
- Upper outside edge of rear fender need to be sharpened.
- The area between rearshield and rear fender looks really weird on your render. I guess you've bumps there. Can we have a better view ?
- You missed a seam running from side to side at the front. Look just behind the Ferrari logo on any refpic.
- Side mirrors are located too high, and their height is too much.
- The door edge is not rounded but sharp.
- The black part at the bottom of the front is too thick, and the center part is raising too high.

About the rear wing, I of course realize it's not innaccuracy but your move to change it. Of course it's up to you to choose what to model, but I can't advise you strongly enough to stick to the stock rearwing.

The same goes for the rims. They are pretty close to the stock ones, but they look more like BMW M6 rims. The bolts are too close from each other, try to simplify that area. Also, the center of a rim is stuck too deeply, try to move it a bit toward the outside.

You need also to improve your render, it's way too dark so far. Also, the flakes in your metallic are all black and too large. Try studying high resolution refpics of the actual car.

It's a nice start, you know have to improve your model. Keep it up !



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Anyone noticed the headlights?
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Old 05-17-2008
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I guess everyone, peterliang. You're right to mention them explicitly, they need work too.



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