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Old 11-20-2004
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She`s on fire

a preview for a friend, who wanted to be sure.
took me about 14 hs to complete, So do you like it?
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Old 11-20-2004
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Could I suggest some things to improve your model?

-The headlights are thicker than they should be, and the blinkers below headlights are thinner than they should be.
-It'd have been better if headlights were modelled instead of mapped. Same with grille.
-The windshield extends too high onto the roof.
-Something about the flow of the hood bothers me. :roll:
-How do the front wheels turn :wink:
-There are brake disks but where are calipers?

I love the carpaint and the texture, btw. And lighting seems to have been done fine.
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Old 11-21-2004
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thanks for your coments, they are very helpfull!
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Old 11-21-2004
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Glad my comments were helpful

I hope to see some updates!
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She`s on fire

Nice flamejob I like it

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She`s on fire

basicly everything has been said that needs to be....the render is great, the flames are hot, but the model needs a little bit of work, good job man





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