[Good old 80's] 1982 Range Rover

[rb-30s]

Hello again everyone,

Here is my entry for that competition. A Porsche 944.

Done only fenders light covers and hood.

[tom120934]

Nice choice of car, rarely modeled.

You have a symmetry issue, at the thickness of the hood.
There is a pinch in the thickness of the fender (at the front).
There is a strange effect on top of the light covers.
In rear of the front wheel arch, you have a bump.
On the wheel arch, about at 45° up from the front horizontal, you probably have an issue with your mesh topology. A triangle I guess. Can we have a wire ?

Otherwise, it looks great. Sounds like this contest starts on good basis.

[vbl_pl]

I think U have some problems with sharp edges. But it's good to see first car for contest

[rb-30s]

@tom - thanks for pointing those out. And u wull see the wires today or tomorrow.

@vbl - yea i know and i personally do all the things like i should but it still gives wierd smooth corners

I think i remake whole car.

[rb-30s]

Here is the wire u asked

I gonna restart the model tonight

[tom120934]

It wasn't a triangle, it's a 4 pole. You should add a row of polys along the edge of the wheel arch. You already have the beginning of one on the rear of the arch.

[rb-30s]

this is what it should look like
but i failed

[tom120934]

About the edge not around the whole wheel arch, you're right.

I was talking about your mesh topology : let a row of poly going around the whole wheel arch, but give an hard edge only on the rear. It will allow you to have only vertices connecting 4 edges and not 5 (4 = 1 accross the fender + 1 under the wheel arch + 2 along the wheel arch)

I fear I'm unclear. I will post a picture tomorrow to clearly show my point.

[rb-30s]

Ok now the Car has been changed to Range Rover 1982

Here is some progress

I made one 3600x2600 pic also

[rallydriver]

Check the hood. It has some bumps.

Attached a ref.pic: