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Old 05-11-2008
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About your answers :

1. I didn't notice you're aiming a precise polycount. So of course you'll be limited. I just wanted to point out the fact than this area looks unnatural because turn signal looks really to be magically glued to the body.

2. Ok, the render you posted looks right.

3. Ok about chrome & rubber. Did you correct the upper edge of the door ? It doesn't appear on your last render.

4. What I mean is, if you look at the middle edge of the hood from side, I guess your model will almost look like a straight line. But hood of actual car look more curvy.

5. It's better now but your render needs some colour correction : the paint is very bright, maybe a bit overexposed, but your tires looks differently lighted. Weird, and impossible. Please take a moment to fix that.

Keep it up, I really like your last render !



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Old 05-13-2008
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Thanks for tips, Tom

Playing with outdoor renders
Any comments are welcome !

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Excellent render, I really have the feeling of movement.

Front wheels are too turned IMHO, but otherwise it looks nice.



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Thanks a lot!
To make smoke I used FumeFX plugin. There is no driver yet but I think I can try to make a human model (e.g. STIG). Just saw that band in rear is floating .
Anyway I really enjoyed outdoor renders.

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This is just awesome, I love the model and the paint is sweet too.


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Old 05-14-2008
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Thanks mate!

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The Render looks great, I like these a lot more than the studio shots you were doing. The driverless car is a bit err weird lol tint the glass next time, or at-least till you get a driver for fun. Anyhow where did you pick up on how to do it? Or did you just stick a picture behind the car and rotate it as needed. Ive heard there is more to it then what I just said. I need to learn how myself.

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Thanks!
It's pretty simple:
Track, smoke, band and those first trees are fully 3d.
I've added background image using alpha channel from render using rotated. all using Photoshop.
And that's all

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Great work !

2 issues found : headlights halo is too much toward the ground, and rear tire is a bit sunk in the ground.

Keep it up, you're really improving yourself;



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