Porsche 356 B

[lostbrain]

My Porsche ! the first finished model. What do you think ?

[SuB-ZeuZ]

looks nice
but the tires are through the ground
3d lines are waayyyy too thick hock:
and its just to smooth, if you want sharp edges, chamfer those edges
Hope this helps

[discocandy]

for your first one. i give you some credit. nice work!
but...
:twisted: now the evil part :twisted:
it looks like a car you use in a disney movie or something.
Donald Duck his car. was the first thing that came to mind.

not bad but it's just al to round. more sharp edges would make it more realistic.

just my 2 cents.

[Icekid84]

hehe yeah its a great start, ( dont take offence) but I kind of agree with Disco. hehe although in that thought it looks cool, Just need to take the advice or sub and Disco, and this should be on its way. Please dont take the criticism harshly, I want you to come back and show more work in the future :wink:

[Bjolletts]

Nice colors and cool choise of car ! It does look a little bit toy-ish with those smooth edges and stuff.

But its a good piece of work indeed ! nice going.

[lostbrain]

thanks for the replys. ok i think it is cartoony too i like cartoons. and a question: Which edges to chamfer ? It's sily but... I'm new. tell me I am making the tutorial Jean Of Arc at the moment and .. I'll continue the work on my F40. I formated my hdd and it was hard to get it back (the model)

[lostbrain]

I chamfered some edges.. but.. You tell. This is my Ferrari F40. Its the first car I started modeling on. It's cool, I think :?

[discocandy]

i've been a moderator for a dj community and the most difficult thing is to express a feeling in words. Please dont take the criticism harshly.
I absolutly like the car!! just want to help people getting better!!