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Old 11-06-2007
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S6 Avant

Hey guys here is my second project here

it was done in c4d 9.6 and render also in c4d

hope you like it
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Old 11-06-2007
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Looks like a forza2 car without interior. Great job
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Shall the braking pads be ON the braking disk?

Other then that great job.


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Old 11-07-2007
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I don't like it much.
It looks a kinde toycar to me.
The seems are not good, there are bumps and th ecar is not so acurate.
For example the front bumper.

Keep it going with your next models!
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Old 11-19-2007
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i love it

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Old 11-19-2007
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The overall feeling is good at first glance. But many of your surfaces are wavvy / bumpy, and your edges need to be sharpened.

I can't critic about accuracy, as I don't know the car very well. But your picture doesn't have the feeling of the real car : sport, luxury, prestige.

And a last crit : the spoke of your rims are way too thin.

I think you should consider work again on it, you're pretty close to get a really great S6.



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