Mercedes-Benz SLK 350

[BCG]

Hi smcars!
This is my new project "Mercedes-Benz SLK 350".
These are some clays and test render.
Modeling : Max9
Vray : RC5
Waiting your comments

[pedro.malheiro]

looking good.. i like the first test render... and the model looks great whait for more test renders

[tom120934]

Welcome to SMC, I hope you'll enjoy your stay.

It's a great model you achieved so far. I really like the level of details you've put into it. Your third render (the one on white background) is excellent.

The only things I'm concerned with are :
- The gear shifter is a bit too inclined toward the front : the driver can't put his fingers on it.
- The whole car looks too narrow. It's especially visible on the 4th picture : you should scale it a bit.

I'm looking forward to see more progress on it. Keep us updated !

[Nik]

Looking really good, cant wait to see some textures on it.

[BCG]

Hi there, thanks for reply my thread
@tom120934: I see, and I fixed, thank you
I have plan for rendering, first in dark studio, second in bright, ofcourse have render for interior.
This's the first render, hope you like
Sorry for my bad Eng

[tom120934]

Impressive render, really. I love the red light in the background.

Some critics however :
- The rims need more depth IMHO.
- The rim shader needs to be more contrasted, it's a bit flat.
- The font used on front license plate is unnatural, maybe you should use thicker font and larger text.
- The floor is a bit weird : it almost looks wet, which is very uncommon for studio shot.

Keep us updated, you're doing a great job !

[BCG]

Thanks Tom, the rim's reflecion is not good in this studio setup, maybe this image a little bit better

[spitty3d]

hhmmmmm, awsome renders man, rly great job on modeling and lighting
five stars from me studio hdr?

[tom120934]

It's better for rim reflections, 5 stars from me too. But the rim still looks a bit flat IMHO. And the other critics still stand

[ericktorio]

nice render, can you give us more perspectives? maybe its good if you render it on much brighter background... two thumbs up...(or even more! hehehe...)