F355 Berlinetta

[outrunner]

Hi guys, here is one of my works

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NightEye

[outrunner]

For this renders I've switched on NURMS surfaces and add little details when needed.

[outrunner]

Final one...

Comments are welcome

PS Thanks to this AMAZING forum for the blueprints

PPS Thanks to my friend Fred Faster for his Italian plate template.

[Idan]

The pictures looks great
Good job

[lackadaisical]

overall looks pretty good

render is good, model has some mistakes
something strange at the corner of rear bumper, the spoiler sould be more defined, and missing small spacer with name badging under spoiler

[LDream]

Very clean car !!!!

[Icekid84]

Well so far I must say its the best F355 anybody has attempted the overall look is good but the key parts make it off. For one your missing the built in spoiler, the car is really prettyfflat inthe back, and your bevel that the lights are in is too angled, same for the lights they should stick out some, The front bumper also is a tad off as well on the very bottom
the very bottom where its flat in the center of the car, that should curve under down not curve straight down . I assume this is confusing you if so I can make a picture

[outrunner]

Originally Posted by Icekid84

Well so far I must say its the best F355 anybody has attempted the overall look is good but the key parts make it off. For one your missing the built in spoiler, the car is really prettyfflat inthe back, and your bevel that the lights are in is too angled, same for the lights they should stick out some, The front bumper also is a tad off as well on the very bottom
the very bottom where its flat in the center of the car, that should curve under down not curve straight down . I assume this is confusing you if so I can make a picture

Thanks to all for comments

Please, Ice, can you show with one picture what you mean?

[Super2nr]

D@@@@MN
That look so realistic. hock:

[Icekid84]

hehe ok I made a small picture up but witha lot of stuff 9 major fixes that would really improve the realistic feel of this car.

1.If this is a road going F355 which it seems to be the GTS model I dont think the Diffuser is neccesary hehe, looks cool but not realistic.
2.See how you made your round lights bend with the bezzel thats not correct, the F355s lights are snuggedinto the bezzel and they are straight.
3.See how your lip comes straight down (or so it appears) on the real car it curves down.
4.Everyone forgets this part lol but I always put it in, and remember it. should be a triangle type design in the trim. (I outlined it on the real picture)
5.Your exhaust pipes are to straight, and the tips should be angled a bit, and yours also look like they are pushing into the mesh.
6.Your LIcense plate holder seems to smooth its actually sharper than that.
7.On the pictures you will see those areas are not like door lines or hood lines they are more deeper and bigger, and in pictures they stand out to the eye more.
8.There is a line under the door ( panel line) I dont kno if you have it but I coudlnt see it.
9.Again same as number 7 more detailed.

Anyhow thats it from me, sorry I'm such a nitpick but Ive low poly modeld this car over 7 times and Ive come to know it pretty well. And oh number 10 PLEASE CHANGE THOSE RIMS lol put the proper 5 spokes on it will greatly improve it hope this helps and I hope you make the changes I look forward to them if you do.