swift

[younglion]

So this is my new project im working on im planing to take my time with this. Its a suzuki swift and one of my favourite hot hatches simple looking looks like fun to drive. Anyways heres my progress about 2 days of work ormore accurately about 6 hours of work but whos counting Crits and comments are welcome

[nosalis]

looks nice and clean.. keep it up.

I would try to get rid of that triangle on the top corner of the hood.. it seems that is causing slight shading issues. Also, it is good (at least for me it is) to post also the base wireframe, withough the meshsmooth .. it's easier to read the flow of the mesh that way

edit: now I see that the last wireframe is actually with no subD .. so yeah.. it's not triangle, .. but that are still is bit suspisions.. it would be good to solve that area differently...
don't forget that you will be splitting the mesh to car parts.. so the hood doesn't have to have exact same number of cross-sections as the bumper and so on.

[younglion]

thanks for the input, so ive tightened up the bevels a bit more and here is my progress so far, the grille and logo took longer than i was expecting but its all good.

[Minde]

Really nice and clean model, but when I hear Swift, the only thought that comes to my mind is Taylor.

[younglion]

Really nice and clean model, but when I hear Swift, the only thought that comes to my mind is Taylor.

haha thanks minde, i guess i should have put suzuki in the title

some updates

[Lackes]

Nice work n choice.
Only the previous generation Swift looks better

[younglion]

thanks for the comment lackes, heres an update, i got some bumps i need to work on. still crits and comments are welcome.
The head light was a tricky shape took me a while to figure it out still not done yet

[SamIAm1]

Good model... nice n clean so far.

One thing I could notice was the part between 'rear wheel arch' and end of 'door-bottom ridge' is gonna give you hard time when rendering in an HDRI, due to irregularities in shape (triangles I suspect?)... probably now would be a good time to correct it before going ahead..

Cheers,
SamIAm.

[TwoOneOne]

looking good. especially the front part looks really well done and the surfaces are very clean. nice.
but in the side view the lower door and the area between the door and the rear wheel arch seem odd. although it´s hard to tell what´s actually going on with these pictures.

[younglion]

Good model... nice n clean so far.

One thing I could notice was the part between 'rear wheel arch' and end of 'door-bottom ridge' is gonna give you hard time when rendering in an HDRI, due to irregularities in shape (triangles I suspect?)... probably now would be a good time to correct it before going ahead..

Cheers,
SamIAm.

actually its all quads just having an issue with it ill try remodeling that part again, thanks

looking good. especially the front part looks really well done and the surfaces are very clean. nice.
but in the side view the lower door and the area between the door and the rear wheel arch seem odd. although it´s hard to tell what´s actually going on with these pictures.

thanks 211 long time man, yea ill continue to work on those areas sort of rushed it a bit.

[helicase]

thanks for the comment lackes, heres an update, i got some bumps i need to work on. still crits and comments are welcome.
The head light was a tricky shape took me a while to figure it out still not done yet

Very cool, you are good at rendering too, so this should be cool when it is done

[younglion]

sorry for the huge delay but i had a few things to fix on this ride, i had to realign some of the verts and also fix some of the bevels but here a tiny progress, the tires have been modeled but there are some issue im fixing before i post them