WIP: M3 Rims

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    M3 Rims

    Hi Guys,

    Just a recent project, would appreciate any tips that could help improve the final images!

    Smad
    Attached Thumbnails Attached Thumbnails M3 Rims-rim01.jpg   M3 Rims-rim02.jpg   M3 Rims-rim04.jpg   M3 Rims-wheel02.jpg  

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    I'd say .. the lighting (especially the keylight) feels too overexposed to me ..

    as per the model, the "holes" for the nuts should be imo deeper,
    the whole center area should aslo maybe be little more deeper inside the rim.
    the inside of the rim (the outer part, not the spokes) looks like have bit different shape then what you got ..
    it would be easier to judge if the lighting (clay) was more contrast .. looks like you have too much bounce/ambient there

    and a super small thing, you're missing the small M logo there on the center

    http://www.m3post.com/forums/attachm...1&d=1269476015

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    Just a nitpicky thing, but the text on the tire should be flipped around so if the writing is up top, it is right side up. Hopefully that makes sense haha.

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    Thanks guys,

    It's always the small things that makes the renders that much better, will post up the new pics when I can get around to it

    Smad

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