Little Bit Suggestion Please :3

[New.Here]

hello guys i m new to this form and auto desk Maya
this is my 2nd project in Maya so far first 1 was a 3d model of sniper but lets get to topic

please give me Ur suggestions how i m making this car "camaro" model

[dave_3d]

Looks good so far, ploy flow looks ok. I am not familiar with Maya so can't really comment further.

What area do you think needs commented on ?

Dave

[Vlad3d]

there is a pinch on rear bumper corner i think there will be a mess with reflections

[blackleo]

Hy there....you can use my tutorial .... Modeling Chevrolet Camaro SS 2010 -3ds Studio Max « Tutorial-z.com

[New.Here]

oh thanks mate for pointing out ^_^ . now then next thing is how will i fix it >_<
never mind i will figure it out

[New.Here]

thanks for ur comment i dont know that y i m asking pros for suggestions

[New.Here]

thanks mate for ur offer i would like to finish this car own my on ^_^ n

[Falango]

I think the front brakes need to be a bit bigger. Front brakes usually fill the space in the wheel, so the caliper almost touches the wheel. Nice work for your second project though, and your poly flow is looking real good.

[New.Here]

I think the front brakes need to be a bit bigger. Front brakes usually fill the space in the wheel, so the caliper almost touches the wheel. Nice work for your second project though, and your poly flow is looking real good.

thanks a lot for your suggestion . I do agree with you about disk break size . But i matched them referance image . I wil make them larger
thanks again:-)

[Falango]

I just had a look at some ref photos and ya, you're right, lol. Tiny little brakes!! I'd make them bigger just so they look better anyways

[New.Here]

hehe thanks anyways

[DAssasin]

Mesh flow seems good. Nice work. Waiting for updates.!

[New.Here]

Mesh flow seems good. Nice work. Waiting for updates.!

thanks a lot mate but i m not able to work on my project because my mouse acting wriedly it will be replaced in couple of days i will post update as soon as possible
thanks again

[SamIAm1]

Hi there...
Front and Side profile are almost flawless... rear may use some more modifications.
1. Rear bumper - pinched as pointed out earlier by vlad3d
2. Rear bumper - looking at that angle (from 5th pic) it looks turning outwards (concave), which is not pleasing to the eyes, you may want to turn it inwards a bit towards ground.
3. Front Grill - Center coming out more than expected (?) probably can be fixed when you work on headlights, and get them in line with each other.

Apart from this, no other comments...! Great modelling considering its your second model .!

~Cheers,
SamIAm

[New.Here]

Hi there...
Front and Side profile are almost flawless... rear may use some more modifications.
1. Rear bumper - pinched as pointed out earlier by vlad3d
2. Rear bumper - looking at that angle (from 5th pic) it looks turning outwards (concave), which is not pleasing to the eyes, you may want to turn it inwards a bit towards ground.
3. Front Grill - Center coming out more than expected (?) probably can be fixed when you work on headlights, and get them in line with each other.

Apart from this, no other comments...! Great modelling considering its your second model .!

~Cheers,
SamIAm

Hello Sam how r u ?
thanks for ur comment really appreciate it . yeah i m working on the pinching problem at rear end but haven't figure it out yet lol

and mate please help me i haven't got what this mean
2. Rear bumper - looking at that angle (from 5th pic) it looks turning outwards (concave)

could u please high light the part that is messed up

i will fix the front grill soon thanks for pointing it out

thanks again

[New.Here]

finally i got my mouse replaced ^_^ now its working fine . now its time for some updates . haven't got much time but any ways . i just finished the camaro fog lamp




waiting for ur comments

[New.Here]

yeah i know its been a really long time i haven't posted any updates and this thread is all most died but never mind . i couldn't work on my project due to limited hardware .but i manage to refine my work i probably buy 16 gig ram and try to finish this project ( currently i m running with 6 gig )
so finally here r some updates i know its not much but its kinda some thing lol











i have redone the rim wasn't happy with the previous one
comments r always welcome

[New.Here]

hey guys i m having problem on camaro head light i dont know whats wrong with it but i m not liking the way it looks . i will appreciate if u guys help me or tell me which thing is messed up or need some tweaking thanks
here is the screen shot

[GrandeP]

I've just had a quick comparison but I can't find anything wrong with your headlight.

[New.Here]

I've just had a quick comparison but I can't find anything wrong with your headlight.

dont know why i m not satisfied the way it looks . it looks unreal to me
btw thanks bro