Nissan s14 240sx lowpoly

[4yBaK]

oke so far i havent done any work on ae86 and now i have modeled this car

c&c always welcome

[Icekid84]

Its a tad bumpy right now but that shouldnt be too hard to fix, since the wireframe looks pretty clean. The front fender is a bit wierd, but is this going to be meshsmoothed or stay as is? if as is Id fix the front fenders since they are too edgy.

[4yBaK]

it will be so as it now.. cuz i model it for a game. i will fix the fenders

[wired]

Looks very nice,it will look great in any game.

[LOST]

Nice, but I agree that you have some bumps on the fender. I think that it'll look very good in game.

[4yBaK]

i have remade the front bumper and added some more polys on the front to make it more rounder so that automaticly means remake of lights and grill

i dont really like the render scene i got any suggestions?

c&c would be nice

[Dauer]

Thats a lot better then the previous shot you have shown. I'm not really familiar with this car so I dont have much to add ..sorry.

[CAH84]

I hope that you will put in some nice detail on those indicator lights like you did the headlights, They just dont match in quality with them.

[skb875]

Hmm, I don't like the renders, but the car model doesn't look too bad.

Render problems:

--Scene:
1,) too dark
2,) seems like you're using spot lights or something to light your scene, you might want to try using an area light and put it off to the distance

--Material:
1,) Needs more gloss
2,) there are too many strange black dots that look like you're trying to get a metallic look.

[4yBaK]

some updates not perfect but i try so hard as i can