my first car seat leon ( remade :) )

[masarka]

last update today

[KIRO]

it looks clean but look the attachment

[masarka]

thaks kiro i aqree with you without 1 of your areas in the middle of hood i don't know what is wrong with it . And bottom part of bumper i totaly wrong i need remade this part but i too lazy to remade it now

[masarka]

wheel and remove some problems

i try to made studio render

[masarka]

next render

[masarka]

any comments?? hmm
start on headlights

[KIRO]

the headlights look fine, the thing I don't like is the tyre, the sidewall look as if it is inwards :O

[masarka]

i remade tire in near future

finish lights and new render

C & C please

[ColdFlame]

i like the model too much but i dislike the last render ...sorry ...that is the reason : reflections are like they are on a low poly model or wasnt rendered by a renderer...

[masarka]

more work

[masarka]

new render

C&C are welcome

[Silent][Moebius]

don't forget to model the inside of the wheelarches. it looks kind of weirdsince you can see through

[KIRO]

no no no, too much blue :O get rid of one of the blue colors ( carpaint or background) you decide which, but I think a simple white background would look much better

[masarka]

kiro: there is it, sorry for low aa setings

[scoobyboy]

go for dark background I reckon and make your paint shiny

[Koykis]

Originally Posted by Silent][Moebius

don't forget to model the inside of the wheelarches. it looks kind of weirdsince you can see through

Same for the grill of the front bumper. I like your model very much, I've seen many supercars and special editions of cars in here so it was time for a plain model. Are you going to model an engine or an interior? If not, why?

[masarka]

yes, i going to do interior and engine, when i satisfaction with renders. Engine will be 1,4 55kw and i hope interior will be fully detailed, and front bumper is finshed, they made it completely same with bumper on my leon

render of back, lights is not finished i not satisfaction how it looks

[soad]

hey
I think you should get rid of paint an work more on modelling add even small details which make car more realistic. Try to sharpen the edges and repair bugs, model lights and it will be cool.

Ihope I helped you.

[masarka]

constructive reply thanks

i agree with you, but in some places i dont know what is wrong, i upload your pictures with some comments

and lights are modeled

and new carpaint

[p4vlik.cz]

*caues, myslim ze uz bys mel udelat neco s tema kolama, takovy ty kryty ty karoserie ci co to je, at tam nejde videt zkrz a taky ty studio rendery vypadaly lip s tmavym pozadim nez se svetlym... myslis ze si tu budou stezovat at mluvim anglicky? *

otherwise it looks really gr8