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Old 01-23-2005
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Smart fortwo Brabus

Hey to everybody! Here's my las project... It's verry on the early begining, but I'm becoming satisfied until now...
This is the Smart fortwo Brabus, as was on the title... I'm using all the contents of the smart website as reff... all the 360's and etc... so...

coments and critics pls!!!



PS.: I'm using 3ds max 6 with vray and the wheels aren't verry acurated, I know
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Nice job sofar, I like it! It has potential
nice to see something diferent!!
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Isn't it the City Coupé instead of ForTwo?

Anyway, looks like a great start keep it up!


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Brabus tunes the fortwo aswell, the brabus fortwo actually is part of the fortwo model series. :?




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Old 01-25-2005
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here come the updates

Well, first of all, I wanna explain that, the name "city coupé" was used on the first generation of smart, when it was the only car of this brand. With the second generation, now it calls fortwo coupé.

Brabus tune all smart line... check on smart website and u'll see...

now what really matters: update there r the first shader test and a wire
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Old 01-25-2005
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sorry

sorry, forgot the wire
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nice start. I can see that you're making some more details on this one.. Looks better then the other ones.. But i beleve that you should make the joints on the bumper a bit larger, so they will be a little more visible... Otherwise a really good job. Keep going

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wow a tuned lawnmower hock:
nice modeling but i've always hated the smart cars...
IMO they look like mentally disabled cars :?
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peace taker, what is lawnmower? I don't speak English verry well... tnx that all of u r thinking that my model is good for now...
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a lawn mower is a thing that cuts grass...you can get them with an engine or you just push it
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But i beleve that you should make the joints on the bumper a bit larger, so they will be a little more visible...
Yeah maybe move one part 1 mm from the other. Will help quite a bit

Oh, and thanks for the explanation


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so, here r some updates... there r the headlights and a clay shot of the hole car... hope u like it!!!!







PS.:the light's aren't the stock ones
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Well no huge problems here, but i found some small ones..

At first, should'nt the bumber be more outwards and straighter?

And there's a little crack just to the left of the wheelhouse, that i dont like.. =)

And the last one, the marked part on the back, should'nt it be a littme smoother there? I think it looks a little too sharp.. Thats all =)


*Edit: I missed the crease on the door... Remove that too =) If it shoul'nt be there, though..
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Interesting, excellent model.

This part of Chrysler or Mercedes or something, isnt it?

Humpty Dumpty was pushed!!!
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well, I don't know if I understood what u said, but smart is a brand from the daimler chrysler grouo, wich englobes mercedes, cherysler and lots of other brands.
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Nice work its a cool little car
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