Peugeot of my design 414

[Farzin_sb]

Hi its my first design & First 3d Working...
i`ve worked on it for the 3rd peugeot contest but i couldnt complete it because of my university exams
Its my first 3rd working so if u have any ideas for it plz tell me. im working on it & will be complete soon

[Dennispls]

why did you post this in background renders and not in Work In Progress?

the car itself needs a lot of work i see smoothing errors all over the place it looks bumpy

[Dober89]

I'm pretty sorry to say this, but this car suks. I mean that new cars are not box like. I sugest you to make it more rounded.

[Jille]

Dober89: Welcome to the board, but have a little more respect next time!



Farzin_sb: That's some design you don't see every day! Would love to see the finished work, since I'm really curious on how it will look!

[Mini_Filip]

Hi,

Since you desidned it yourself, can we see your sketches? That would be great.

[hartleym]

looks a little lumpy in places..but interesting design. keep it up!

[Farzin_sb]

hi and tnx for your opinions , im so glad of such friends and im so proud o f u
im working on it , ok as soon as posible i will scan and send the skatches of this , its not realy this much bumpy but because of placements i`ve reduced its edges so it looks this how...
till the end of the next week ... tnx a lot bye @};-

[Dober89]

Oh :? . You should said that at the begginnig. I take my words back. I really really sorry ops: . I'm just a newbie at modeling.

[Farzin_sb]

I have completed it a little more , plz tell me your opinions again tnx guys

[peacetaker]

I must say that its a pretty original car, but it needs a lot of chamfering to make it look good.
dont get me wrong i like the idea but it is in serious need of chamfering.

[Farzin_sb]

Hi everybody just added 2 more pics of it , dont forget your opinions...

[Silent][Moebius]

what a chaotic design you should try to concentrate on cleaner shapes that are defined by very few lines.
wheels look alright though