Gurki's Ferrari Maranello

[Gurki]

Hi.. My new wip here.. Ferrari maranello..

Here is 2 Clay renders and one TEST-render. Nothing to critic on that one..

And now I dont want people only to say that there is a lot of errors, I just want you to say what I can do about them.. If i knew how to fix them, I would already have done it.

Most of the bumps i already know, and I've got tips how to fix them, so I will do that tomorrow.

Note: This is 550 Maranello, not 575...

[Gurki]

Tire. I've just edited a bit.. And i know that the red.. hmm "Brake-thing" is really off, but i dont really know how to model them, and i wont make closeups on it..

[Turboracer]

Ah, looks very nice, although bumpy in some places. Btw, if you're using vray in those first three renders, you still have the standard light in there(from the camera viewpoint). Just make a skylight and turn it off and it won't use that light anymore.

[-monster-]

A few problems that I found (not an expert on ferraris tho...):

-The edge on the windscreen should be sharper
-Make the front bumper wider

[Bjolletts]

Nice render ! The clay surface looks pretty ok too, must say that you work fast man !

I would try to make the side to hood area softer, right now it feels a biot to sharp/boxy there. Good job though!

[Gurki]

Originally Posted by A.Loponen

A few problems that I found (not an expert on ferraris tho...):

-The edge on the windscreen should be sharper
-Make the front bumper wider

Well, think you're right about that.. But my Top blueprint says it should be as it is on my model, and my front blueprint says it should be as you say.. But i chose the top bp, wich was a mistake i think...

Thanks for the tip..

Originally Posted by Bjolletts

Nice render ! The clay surface looks pretty ok too, must say that you work fast man !

I would try to make the side to hood area softer, right now it feels a biot to sharp/boxy there. Good job though!

Thanks Well the reason why I work fast I think, is just because I'm doing it quite messy, wich is a big problem.. But if I do it slow, I just get tired of it..

Hmm do you mean above the wheelhouse?

[Bjolletts]

Originally Posted by Gurki

Hmm do you mean above the wheelhouse?

I dont know the car too well so I looked at this reference which is taken from about the same angle as the render: http://www.seriouswheels.com/pics-20...Angle-2-st.jpg

It looks like it should be softer of the wheelhouse and between wheelhouse and door.

[Johansson]

Nice rim and love the shader on it, BUT that caliber is not so nice, try the link that i´ve giving you, så you atleast get the right shape

[Gurki]

Yeah.. I think ure right.. And i Noticed that my hood doesn't look like the real ones.. Thanks for pointing that out..

Johansson... Caliber? (Think you mean the.. break-thing? ) Hmm I may be quite off tonight, but what link?

[Gurki]

A.Loponen: I just noticed something... The front isnt wrong actually.. (Not according to my top view blueprint).. But the tire is turned, so it looks like the front is wrong..