Opel Astra DTM lowpoly, New Beetle started...

[jumpman]

hi I have textures on my S2k in progress and I started new project "Astra DTM", it will be lowpoly...

... actual polycount is 490 polies

[jumpman]

story continue :mrgreen: c & c are welcome :twisted:

BTW: i need some reference of side skird if you have got it pls. share it THANX

[mr.mean]

hmmm yes i like it :mrgreen:
keep up the good work but uhm i whas wondering wich prints did u use??
and could u maybe send me the cutted prints in a zip

anyways keep up the work!!

[Sir_David_P]

same here on the prints as mean said XD i got a Really over do car to do XD

[revelli]

good jumpman, your are better and better on lowpoly
try to add some polies to those parts

[doch_1]

looking nice jumpman
the same as what revelli pointed out , and something I found on the net ( sideskirt ) , hope it will help .

[NightEye]

And remove all unnessecary polies on the bumper.. There are quite a lot

[revelli]

NE have right, on the bottom part of the bumper i see 3 edges very close together
and whats the resolution of your blueprint?

[jumpman]

THANX all have true this is last update today(sorry for compresion ) BPrints are in attachment..

[revelli]

try to play more with smoothing groups

[jumpman]

2revelli: 2smoothing groups will be time after modeling...I used only " SMOOTH" modifier... here is new pic..

[ML]

hmm, you should play with smoothing groups while you are modelling because it helps spotting bumpiness and such.. because if you want to play with smoothing groups after you get everything done, you'll have lots of vertices to move around and not really efficient imho

[jumpman]

ok, guys I going to play with SG

[NightEye]

Not nessecary, just use flatshade :roll:
Anyway, you've wasted quite some polies in - for example - the rearlight.. Why not cut them, and use them on the shape of the frontlight, backfender, etc.. This is just too lowpoly for my taste

[revelli]

nice update, but some places have really chaotic edges placed

[jumpman]

NE+revelli: you have true, I must repair it... here is new render with SGs...

[XSImatrix]

52 minutes!!!! wtf

You must be killing yourself to get these renders.

You might want to get contacts in here, so they can help you out in renders, or do renders themselves for you.

As for the model, Their are too many sharp corners or very sharp edges that arent on the car (i know its low poly) Like other poeple have said, the front bumper needs work(sharp corner on extruded lips) Lights need to be a bit rounder, add some more polies(dont be afraid to use tris, but dont use to many of em ) And the car still needs seams.

GudLuck Buddy!

[killerskull]

Is this his first time? maby thats why its takin long. It doesnt look bad though, yea lots of sharp corners though

[Dennispls]

some few things to pay attention to