Crazy Japanese Tuning Final Renders :)

[ArsenYu]

I start first project, it for tuning contest.*

I Progress so far . much way to go. lots a hard work.

How do render nice? :? :? :?

[p4vlik.cz]

this can be cool man

[revelli]

well, i dont like it, there are many errors and not good modelled places
and do not use so brighten hdris, you can pust a white box above the car for good result

[NightEye]

Originally Posted by revelli

and not good modelled places

You can't even see that :?
Sure, it needs work, but that's why it's in WIP

I think it looks good sofar, but try rendering with perspective

[revelli]

well, try to look at the place inner the red line, and look at the model

[NightEye]

You said "not good modelled places", you can't see that without a wireframe..
Since you said "there are many errors", you should place that under the error, and not under the "not good modeled places".
Without a wire, you can't crit on someones modeling work, only on accuracy (okay, bumps, but he ain't got bumps).

[o.j]

Actually you can say that the wire is not too clean. When the same line of polys doesn't continue on after a gap the reflections get messed up 95% of the time.

To the modeler i suggest you first show claymodels ( standard material everywhere) and wireframes of the model. I'll gladly help you get the polys good. Also please don't rice this thing out too much. A regular subtle bodykit and some decent rims plus decent drop would be good enough as long as the model it self is done well.

Cheers,
Oliver.

[ArsenYu]

Thank you much for comments.
I soory i so bad in 3d. ops:
I work very hard to get beter, i do like o.j. said and make standard material render. i think it look much more good now.

also i make car in van, so no rear window for kids. and i change rear view window too. as i going to full pimp it.

[polarexpress17]

definately looks better man, ur getting there

[ArsenYu]

Thank you polarexpress17, i study much last days. I go to all topics and write all good so easy for me learn.

i restart project but do same car toyota porte. i decide to crazy tune it like in japan. see pics

i start with the hood it carbon fibre.

[Sir_David_P]

Originally Posted by ArsenYu

Thank you polarexpress17, i study much last days. I go to all topics and write all good so easy for me learn.

i restart project but do same car toyota porte. i decide to crazy tune it like in japan. see pics

i start with the hood it carbon fibre.

one thing i gotta MASSIVE OVERKILL on the styling on those vans and the trucks......

[jumpman]

now it look better, your modeling skills are improving!!!!!

[Zachary]

Originally Posted by Sir_David_P

one thing i gotta MASSIVE OVERKILL on the styling on those vans and the trucks......

dunno about that overkill thingy... i just cant get enough of those machines (love 'em all)* :twisted:
after all i have plenty of DVD material of those machines.

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@ Yu
yep your modeling skills are improving as ppl haves already told

[ArsenYu]

My internet broken so not possible update. Fix now so here updtaes.
Hope it good. i practice much.

[Icetiger01]

Thats is really crazy but looks kinda sweet

[garethgeezer]

Wow! Not sure about those 'plastic fantastics' in the photos, but man I LOVE that wheel Nice work

[o.j]

I have to admit i was not expecting such level of detail when i saw the first pictures. It looks good and better yet, crazy :mrgreen:

Good luck.

[Inquieto]

Wow! 8o You have improved your modelling skills very much in short time!! There is maybe too much crazy details around the car, but i like it!

[Dennispls]

indeed it looks great