Bmw 120d

[Race Speeder]

well guys,
after my new windows install, i lost the audi a8.... :'(
and here is a brand new bmw 120d
tomorrow i will post wire shots, but this is what i got after 1 day of modelling

[SlaYa]

wutup man? you're still doing a 1-series huh.. I gave up on mine, I wanted a more sporty looking car, so I modeled s2000.. check it out sometime!

coming along pretty decent so far.

[revelli]

good start, but: 1. red line, this part could be more deeper
2. blue line, the hole could be more cylindrical

[Race Speeder]

update:
and that round, its round from the front view, but u look at the car within an different camera (perspective)

[Mista.David]

Looks ok, however i can spot a couple of triangles in there 8o, u should get rid of em, front wheel arch and stuff...

[Race Speeder]

In this case, the tri's can stay since they don't bug anything and they are on a nearly flat surface

[Catlin]

hmm hi there i think its ok for now it can be tweaked later on but i do see a sharp edge on the front bumper try sorting that out

[Race Speeder]

that sharp edge has to be there, dunno why? bmw designed it

[Catlin]

oh yeh just saw on a pic sorry stupid bmw cantmodel for **** lol

[revelli]

you can remove those edges

Are the windows supposed to look like that?