Renault Megane Trophy

[evil-98]

Hi im pretty new posting here, but im pretty familar with this forum :mrgreen:
this is my newest project, its a low poly model. im not that familar with modeling low
poly cars. so if you guys can help that be great.

Software: 3dsmax 8 Renderer: Vray

wires:





renders:





if you guys got any refs pic post them up. thanks

C&C

[Icetiger01]

Something is not right in front
http://www.accessvision.co.jp/lesmai...e_trophy-2.jpg
http://www.accessvision.co.jp/lesmai...e_trophy-1.jpg
http://www.accessvision.co.jp/lesmai...e_trophy-3.jpg
http://www.accessvision.co.jp/lesmai...e_trophy-4.jpg
http://www.motorvision.es/salonb2005...ganetrophy.JPG
http://www.motorvision.es/salonb2005...etrophybis.JPG

[evil-98]

thanks for the refs.

hum well the fenders are different. what else?

[Ravens]

heeey evil loook good man Some flaws.//

i mean with the flaws, the place where it meets the headlights, is to straight..

[masarka]

i think model is to low-poly and not correct ( front door, wheels atc.. )

If you add more polyes to good places will be looking cool

[revelli]

like it, but use less chamfer for the edges on the wheel arches
and add more faces to the front bumper

[evil-98]

hum thanks

revelli: ya there are alot of chamfers, i took out a whole loop alreadys so thats kinda fix i think :roll: what can i add to the front bumper?

masarka: the blueprints that im using that i got from here are kinda really off lol what do you mean the front door? and the wheels are the wheels on the blue print...

Ravens: point it out for me ya lol

[Ravens]

ok i will pait it ASAP

[evil-98]

thanks

heres a update. i decided to take out most of the chamfers save some polys and put else were
but for how its chamfered all over

wire:



renders:

[DrumBoPing]

looks pretty sweet, could use some more detail ..

[evil-98]

i hear you, just dont know where to put it.. lol i add door handles :roll:

[Ravens]

Well here you go, i never painted much on drawings, so eh yea lol i tried my best...!


good luck

[evil-98]

8o sweet thanks

[Themainkiro]

you could put a meshsmooth to the car I see it has all the nececery chamfers, so the model will stay accurate

[masarka]

here i think you look for pictures which i post and compare with some ref pictures

and spoke of wheels not narrow

Thats all of my advices

keep working look preaty good, are you do to the game?

[evil-98]

update on the wires.

looks kinda weird due to persective



about the rims. im just going to model new ones lol :roll:

thanks

edit:

heres some renders of the updated wire

[Ravens]

front rim is to big

and the bottom grill, is still to high..

[evil-98]

yes it is ill fix that.

does anyone have better refs for those rims?
the blue prints that im using have the rims
that i have on the model right now.
16 spokes compared to the 12 spokes that you
guys are showing me. i like the 12's better

[Ravens]

Here you go,, if you need more ask

56k hold on

[evil-98]

thanks

new rims added brakes disk and clips
i modeled these yesterday. tell me if they look good enough.