C4- 2nd car attempt

[DbblGlock]

well this is my second ever car after the lancer evo 8. (whcih i didn't finish)
well i put a 2 minute paint job on there and i havn't completely finished (lights, alloys, and other finishing touches)
in the first pic the spoiler was just for fun. i made the bodykit myself with some reference with the carzone bodykit. i need to mesh up the holes etc and refine it furthur.
well just tell how u think i'm coming on plz.

[XSImatrix]

this car is scary,

show us ssome clays please, your 2 min paintjob SUCKS!! literally , ppl will be scared by this!

so, um.... i really dont know how to crit this since it is custom body kit, i feel it barely has any influence of carzone kit, and if it does, it needs alot of work. Please use reference pics !!! everyone will tell you that... its because its true.


the front of the car looks sloppy and should be refined..

dont get discouraged.. KEEP AT IT!!! and finish this!!

[revelli]

you have done good job on the modelling
but try to use freshnell reflexions next time

[ColdFlame]

'no comment' lol .go on working....

[DbblGlock]

here are the clay models and a wire pic.
remember i am not a professional at 3d modelling and this is only my second ever car. i count this as valuble experience that will help me in the future to make better cars.

XSImatrix - i don't really care about if my bodykit looks even remotely like the carzone one. i said i used it as some referance. i should have clarified. i used the carzone bodykit for a basic shape that i could modify myself to make my own unique body kit. i have to agree with u on the paint job though. it is crap and that is why i said it was a 2 sec paint job. not really sure what u mean by sloppy front though.

revelli- thanx

ColdFlame- ye sure i will.

[DbblGlock]

i am having some trouble modeling the lights. i don't really know the best way to do it. can someone please point me in a nice direction.
here is a new screen for my car. i need to fix one area it seems. (the rear part above the windows) beacsue it isn't right. i still need to make the tires properly.
comments and crits are welcome. and even more helpful if u say the problem and how to go about fixing it. thanx