Audi A8 2002

[darth carth]

might sound crude but:
- loose alot of poly's on the part thats above the front wheel
- loose alot of poly's on the roof
- at the top of the front door there is a big dent
- the thing at the rear window (that I mentioned earlyer) is still crooked
- the piece of bodywork between the rear door and the rear window is also bumpy

Don't take this wrong, they are just pointers to help you out... fix those and the model will look much better and smoother. I know how hard those parts on top of the doors are I also tried them on mine already and failed miserably

oh and btw: that logo looks nice... but if you want I can give you mine. It has about 3 times as many poly's tough lol
just let me know, and also in what format you need it
We Audi fans need to help each other

[gtautos]

Thanks, i will do them, but here is a little update:

[revelli]

looks still very bumpy
can you show wires?

[gtautos]

Later there will be, i have to sort problems first

[gtautos]

here is an update

[clix101]

wow, your modeling has really improved still some bumps here and there but overall much much better

[Silent][Moebius]

great improvement to the previous shots. the headlights look great.

though A B and C-pillar are still very bumpy as well as the rear wheel arch.

[darth carth]

yeah those pillars should really be straighten out more ...
Just try to get it smooth and it will look much better. Also that black strip on the doors, isn't it a tad to high? Not sure tough could be the angle
Also the rear wheel arch is bumpy...

EDIT: just noticed... try to reduce the number of poly's on the trunk and roof... will give a cleaner result.
Also a good tip for those pillars is to first make them with only 1 poly (just a plane from top to bottom) and then divide it into pieces and correct where nessecairy... used the same methode and got this (see attachment and don't mind the bugs in the model, it's an old render and most of them are fixed already)

[gtautos]

i don't really get you , anyway here is an update, i had to restart the model once again

[darth carth]

don't know something still looks off... can't really point my finger on it. Wireframe perhaps, might make it easyer to see?

[Race Speeder]

its a bit bumpy you know...
like the last modell, i see it in the window parts

[Silent][Moebius]

right now it looks a lot better than the previous attempts