RI- AC Schnitzer V8 BMW Z4

[NightEye]

And my crit about the light still stands

And there's some kind of dent below the rearlights

[KIRO]

NE what exactly do you mean could you make a pic, and here are some renders and I happen to like them

[NightEye]

Then I guess you didn't read this yet

Originally Posted by NightEye

The side intake should be a bit sharper, and the edge at the outside of the lights is a little off
http://automobile.2405.com/automobil...pster_2405.jpg

I mean exactly what I wrote there (with outside, I mean the side closest to the side) Compare it with your render, you'll see

[andybuck]

i cudnt belive that this car existed cus the tuning looked so wierd, so i googled it and i noticed a few errors, the rear window thing that covers half of it up needs to go further in and more flat, the spoiler on the roof needs to swoop down more instead of up and i think the rear trunk spoilers are too high and large, all the edges around the rear light need to be sharper, there shudnt be a gap between the back bumper and the bottom bumper bit. and it looks like you missed a big line on the back bumper. look at this pic
http://automobile.2405.com/automobil...pster_2405.jpg

oh and the top left corner of the light shud be sharper

[KIRO]

NE I tryed to fix that thing you mentioned but it is still not 100% accurate and andy about that line on the back I know bu I probably won't model it

[Silent][Moebius]

i think the crease running above the front wheel arch is too strong.

modeling wise this project is very nice, but the modifications aren't very beautiful imo

[KIRO]

more renders and less work

Ugly car, Beautifull model

[evilhoodlem]

i agree, i don't like the tuning, the body style just looks weird. but the model is beautiful!

[Race Speeder]

i only dont like the rear wing...
the idea of the wing in the back of the top is great!
try out 1 big rear wing..

[XCNuse]

door.. stilll isnt right kiro, pay more attention to the body of the car, its alot harder than what most people think, the whole side of car isnt as easy to do as it looks to get right
http://www.arcadiadreams.com/images/...hnitzer_01.jpg

[KIRO]

the trunk is not a beauty and neither is the interior but I am not very fond of modeling interior parts so next to come, door panels, main console, wipers and some other details, if you have any ideas about the trunk I'll be glad to hear them

[KIRO]

steering wheel

[ColdFlame]

i think the render is a lil dark but the model still looks stunnin(steerin wheel)

[XCNuse]

kiro, you seriously need to just plain slow down, i've watched you make 3 cars the past couple of months and seen how easily you make mistakes that need to be fixed; i've seen your work and i know you have a seirous potential of being good, but you work so fast you just make mistakes that people say (like mine about the doors which still dont seem to be fixed) but rather just work really fast to finish it... but.. it doesnt look right

just.. take it slow, and you will be amazed at what you can make
(i just got lucky and used what i had learned and a ****load of reference pictures for the Z4 coupe.. thats why it came out so nice so fast)

[nonameprodukt]

I agree with XCNuse. Slow down- try to make a model which won't be just nice. It takes a time to be better and better.

Anyway- it looks nice...

[Silent][Moebius]

the steering wheel is a beauty... but brown CF? :roll:

about the trunk. your main speakers seem to be looking down, just rotate them so they looks upwards. you could add some golden lights in the trunk to give an atmospheric effect.

[KIRO]

I'll put some orange neons in the trunk, and about the CF look at this: + some renders, oh and one question does anyone how to create sway material like the one of the steering wheel :O ??

[XCNuse]

lol strange looking carbon fiber, i kinda like it though

what do you mean 'sway' .. im gonna guess that you mean suede..

what i would do, is.. make something with hm.. 40% specular
and then in the diffuse map, put in noise
and make it that grey color and then i guess just run like.. a sphere UVW map on that section only (if it maps weird then i would use a sphere uvw map)

[Silent][Moebius]

hmm yes interesting carbon fibre. but the carpaint in your render is just too grainy. compared to the paint in the refpic you will need something that is very orange and sort of *creamy* lol