toyota supra (tuned)

[300zx_9]

i first of all would like to thank redstar for his supra tutorial that inspired me to make one my self and learn alot from him. It was going all smooth until i came upon this prroblem shown in my clay render the bottom left corner of my back lights have some kind of bug i couldnt fix it my self so i thought i would ask you guys.

[RedStar]

You need alot more polies on the back part. And use reference thats the best thing you can do besides blueprints. Here is a pic of rearlights, if you look yours are way too big.

[clix101]

yeh, i agree with RedStar, but apart from that it looks great so far

[revelli]

nice, just fix some bumps and the rear part
i cant wait to see more

[docile]

the fronts lookin good

[300zx_9]

the front is done the side needs heaps of work im changing the skirt im looking at some designs but that will be happening when i get the main shape for the back.

[300zx_9]

hey guys umm heres a wire of the back can anyone help me out a lil do i need more faces,polygons and chamfering?. I have been copying the wire frame of redstar's supra and thats what i got so far any other advice will be well taken.

[300zx_9]

i fixed alot of it and i started on windows etc here you go c+c welcome

[Silent][Moebius]

umm pic?

[clix101]

lol, yeah

it looks really nice, no bumps and stuff really clear modelling
Nah, i'm just messing with ya

[300zx_9]

haha im a fool lol ill have more renders really soon so stay tuned.

[RedStar]

Once again buddy take a good look at reference and blueprints. Your thing around the rearlights is way to wide. If you dont get what im saying please tell me and ill post a picture.

[300zx_9]

hey redstar yeh i get what your saying but this supra is tuned everything in it is tuned have a look at this render and if you dont like it so far then tell me what i can change to make it better thnx.

[RedStar]

Tuned or not this is totally wrong. First of all supras trunk always ends completely not the way you have it. Second you are missing a nice round bump that the trunk has which yours doesn’t have at all. Also here is a picture of what I was talking about and I don’t think you understood, but there is no supra with anything this wide. And it does not go as far as you have it so that the place for license plate is right under it. If you really want to improve in 3d you must go for accuracy and not go with the easy way out. Sorry if you don’t like the way im saying this but if you post in wip that means you want comments and here are the comments.

[clix101]

yep, i agree with RedStar on that one

[300zx_9]

guys i dont take your crtis as something bad but i take them ask pointers to help me through modelling the car i think now looks better so redstar here you go tell me what you think. Thank you for your opinions and crits cuse thats what i need to make my car look better.

[Catlin]

MUCH BETTER! looks cool man keep it up ill be keeping a close eye on this topic

[300zx_9]

thankyou i should be test rendering some high quality renders soon just to see if it looks reall enough.

a test clay render with mag wheels what do u guys think.

[RedStar]

Not bad but that wide this is still too wide man, trust me on this one, fix it.