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Old 07-05-2006
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BMW Series 1

Hy, I'm new with modeling, this is my second car (that's going to be finished, i hope).Anyway, here's what I've got so far... C&C are more than welcome (I know that area around fogligts need to be fixed).

See you soon with an update.
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Old 07-05-2006
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Nice start...
keep up the good work!!!
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Old 07-05-2006
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bumper needs work and also u need to work on the poly flow (it needs to flow more in a curve like manner)

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Nice start...
keep up the good work!!!
Thanks...

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bumper needs work and also u need to work on the poly flow (it needs to flow more in a curve like manner)

regds
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I know , I've just started and there's a lot of errors to fix, but thanks for pointing them out...

P.S.
I have a problem. I tryed some colours with VRay 1.47.03 and 3ds max 7 (I used VrayHDRI) and it shows me some kind of error and it just dont render that box (16x16 px) that is, thank god, on the side of the picture, so i can move it. I'm absolutely new with VRay and HDRI (no error when no HDRI).
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Old 07-05-2006
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dont have vray or max so i cant help with the render error, but... youve made a great start to the car, especially since this is only your second one keep it up
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Thanks clix101

I worked on bumper, aded some stuff... Like I said, more critics, beter results, so...

Here's an update...
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Old 07-05-2006
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about that problem, I had something similar... but I just deleted the plane (or box w/e) and made a new one and the problem seemed to be fixed... perhaps you could try that?

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I tryed to render without skylight, with 2 omnis instead and... Had no problems... I thnk HDRI has to do something with it... Never mind, it's OK like this (I think).

Thanks for reply...

Update is here (test silver color, clay, wire)...
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Nice work, looks good to me but make sure to check alot of ref pics for accuracy, heres a link which had alot of bmw pics ( scroll down to find the 1 series ) http://www.netcarshow.com/bmw/
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front bumper needs work, mainly around the license plate area
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Nice work, looks good to me but make sure to check alot of ref pics for accuracy, heres a link which had alot of bmw pics ( scroll down to find the 1 series ) http://www.netcarshow.com/bmw/
Thanks, I only have about 20 pics of it...

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front bumper needs work, mainly around the license plate area
I'd be very grateful if you'd point that out on the pic, thanks.
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Old 07-06-2006
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Small update. I worked on front bumper, added some details... Side of the car is killing me... curve here, curve there...

Two pics (messing with the colour and clay)...
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Another update... Worked on the back a bit...
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the latest clay from the back looks awesome to me.i cant comment on accuracy cuz i dont know that car but the model looks smooth and clean.good work mate..keep it up..
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the latest clay from the back looks awesome to me.i cant comment on accuracy cuz i dont know that car but the model looks smooth and clean.good work mate..keep it up..
Thanks for coment, but I'm glad that you cant 'cuz I just can't get it perfect (or almost perfect, whatever ). I'll try to fix it up as much I can...
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uu nice BMW

looks good sofar
keep it up
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uu nice BMW

looks good sofar
keep it up

I'll do my best.

Thanks for reply and commendation, it means much to me...
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Long time no update

Cuple of renders... I just love this colour...
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It just wont be me if I don't update every cuple of hours...

C1="coments"
C2="critics"

C1,C2=constant

[ help for solving the problem: F(x) -> function of "x" ]

f(C1+C2)=?

I'm sooo tired... Straight to bed...
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C1="coments"
C2="critics"

C1,C2=constant

[ help for solving the problem: F(x) -> function of "x" ]

f(C1+C2)=?
lol, whats this supposed to mean

and btw, lovely bmw, but... the part where you made the indent in the middle of the back bumper is incorrect. It should be a bit lower down becuase the hard line that comes out from the sides of it actually goes above it if you catch what i mean :/ anyway, check alot of refs and you'll see 'part from that, looks great, keep it up