BMW 7 Series not finished but almost

[afro_02]

Hope u like it guys.

[clix101]

looks nice can we see a clay and wire? thnx

[outtanames]

Some serious inaccuracies but okay. =)

[Silent][Moebius]

with those headlights it almost looks like a merc...

i like your materials! some pinching here and there but the model looks decent

[afro_02]

THNX guys well this is really my second model and i am new to max there are only 2 month since i have started working with max and i think i have showed a little result.

[afro_02]

And by the way i cannot model the lights in the back of the car it looks like a disaster. i have to work on it .

[Silent][Moebius]

the result looks pretty good for a second model

[afro_02]

Thanx a lot. i hope I get better in the future.

[afro_02]

Im just trying renders cuz i wanna get better one it.

[Silent][Moebius]

renders look ok, but i would recomment you should work some more on refining your model. in my attachment you can see some issues you need to take care of to make this look more like a BMW and less than a (crappy ) mercedes

red - this line needs to be defined better
blue - your missing this trim, or it needs to be far more pronounced
pink - your grill needs this shape, also it looks a bit streched now
green - (maybe not soooo important to fix) this edge you have made is too sharp, it needs to be smoother

good luck fixing

here is a page with very good reference

http://www.desktopmachine.com/cars/1...pers.html?t=56

[darth carth]

also when doing a studio render, maybe it's better to not use a image for the reflections. Also like you see in S][M's picture the paint is alot more grainy.

Except the few issue's S][M pointed out it looks very good for a second model.

[Silent][Moebius]

Originally Posted by darth carth

also when doing a studio render, maybe it's better to not use a image for the reflections. Also like you see in S][M's picture the paint is alot more grainy.

Except the few issue's S][M pointed out it looks very good for a second model.

metallic paint actually looks pretty much the way he did it...

[darth carth]

yes but in a studio? with those reflections?
I don't know for sure, coulb be that I'm wrong here... but the bckground sugests the car is in a studio, but the reflections look like it's outdoor :?

[Silent][Moebius]

yeah sure, i was just talking about the way the paint reflects

[afro_02]

Thanx guys for you advises I really dont know how to make scene studio for car renderings I just used my imagination, im not good at rendering so if you have any way how you can show me how to make a studio some tutorial or so using Vray, it would be helpfull.

[PunkGuy]

hmm the shape isnt so clean for me. look at photos and fix the car. will try to help

[afro_02]

Here is a clay and another render with no HDRI map I tried with a plane above and a vray light.

[darth carth]

looks much better now the car is really in a Studio

[Silent][Moebius]

i agree with darth

now you will have to finally refine your model

[afro_02]

thnx guys