Audi A8

[Overwinder]

WIP

[RedStar]

You need to work more on your sharpness of the vehicle. Once you get that done your car will look 10x better.

[Catlin]

its all very blocky too me it dosnt look like an audi,audi have smoth arches and stuff but this just needs to be worked upon

[Silent][Moebius]

seems to me like you got the basic shape right. only issue atm is imo, the edge i marked in red

@sean
yeah weirdly the A8 doesn't fit 100% into the overall design of audi. it's more blocky than the rest of the cars.

[Overwinder]

Now I only must build the underbody and the side mirrors, then he is finished.

[Silent][Moebius]

hey man nice progress you made

there are a lot of things though to make this car look like a very nice A8 in the end it just needs some refining overall so you can get an awesome result.

generally you are missing a lot of sharp edges/your edges need to be sharper

Front
bright blue - this edge should be cleaner
yellow - missing some edges/creases
red - the detail shouldn't be as far indented as you have made it right now, simply pull it out a little
green - theres more of an edge there
blue - should be clear

big reference pics: http://www.desktopmachine.com/cars/7...l?pag=25&t=142

now about the rear end
red - this line is too sharp, it gives your A8 a too muscular agressive look
yellow - easy to fix, there is actually a tiny ledge there. it makes a big difference if your missing it though
green - check these on ref pics

i'm sorry if my crits are too much of nit picking just tell me and i will stop i'm sort of a perfectionist adn well it's almost a bad habbit of mine *lol*


your doing a great job on the A8 it just needs some refinement

[felle__sweden]

Very nice !! I agree with previous comment though