Audi R8

[LexXx]

hey there! after my pure BMW i saw that ppl were---> "LOL" so i started a new one... Audi R8 Its not gonna be a car like super Model of
Mr.Overwinder but i think u gonna help me with my modeling
here is the first pic...

[Overwinder]

Nice start, you should tweak some places in your wire and you should remove this triangle in your headlight corner.

[LexXx]

Originally Posted by Overwinder

Nice start, you should tweak some places in your wire and you should remove this triangle in your headlight corner.

tnx for advice man
but its not a 3d Max its maya so its working a little bit different... after my finishing it will be converted to the Sub-D and fixing all coners by uncreasing or full creas
what about triangle? why not?
btw a progress pic another one...

[LexXx]

just was trying to rendering what do u think ppl?

[Prykie]

Cool render mate! Car has a few bumps here and there, nice start though

[LexXx]

some update...

[clix101]

looks good but some clay and wire renders would help us

[LexXx]

car body is done ( i think )

looks good but some clay and wire renders would help us

lol im just started to modeling so i have no idia how to do wire render in Maya
sorry

[LexXx]

simle rims , window... just didnt have a lot of time...


And guys! someone knows where i can get tutorial for Maya about how to modeling a rim? couse i dont know from where i need to start its too difficult..
tnx

[LexXx]

Mate view

[LexXx]

just rim...

i see noone want to help me with my modeling..

[Silent][Moebius]

hi man sorry i haven't decided to comment your work any further but if you want some good hints and tips on this model check out the other R8 threads that are going on atm, seems like this is a vey popular car right now

anyway if you want me to help you, i can point out some inaccuracies (which you have a lot of but all can be fixed!)

first of you need to study many reference images to get a great result in the end.

i will comment on the side of your car first now as it hast the most flaws atm some refining and some seams are needed then you are ok.

red - pretty wobbly get it straight
yellow - these areas need more attention they are either wrong or need better chamfering
blue - this seam runs in one straight line from the headlights to the door!
light blue - you missed a seam
green - be carefull to get the wheel arches nicely round, same goes for the front end
purple - again a bit wobbly

there are quite a lot more points that could be adressed now, but don't need any mentioning. i'm sure that you can fix the errors as i see how far you managed to get to now.

jabbasworld is an excellent base for reference picture of almost any car that has been built in the last years. have fun and enjoy