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Old 01-27-2007
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H2 MOD

started about 5 weeks , close tofinish the exterior so i need your crits.
i'll post a few earlier renders (but with materials) later
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Old 01-27-2007
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Looks great ! Very smooth and massive, just like the real one. Keep going !



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looks good keep it up
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yeh looks good, dont know this car very well but i think some of the edges here and ther need to be alot sharper

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looks good keep it up, my only critiques is chk the roof it appears to be smearing into the rods on top!

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mmmmm ..... ,yeah you're right rahul , i wouldn't have noticed this in a million years , i'll fix it now
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mmmmm ..... ,yeah you're right rahul , i wouldn't have noticed this in a million years , i'll fix it now
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Ahhh, the H2...The sexiest of ALL cars in the universe. It's what Halle Berry would be if she was powered by a V8 and weighed in at almost 2-ton...

However, apart from the typical boxy shape of this totally-tubular vehicle, I'm sorry to say it just doesn't feel like a H2 to me...Sorry, but these babys are my favourite. It might be the angle, but it looks too thin...also, some of the sharp edges need to be...well, sharper. Good work though mate, it's still gonna make a great show-reel piece!!

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LOL Dr. Feelgood , yeah buddy , maybe it's the blueprint im using cause i followed every inch of it , i did't like it's 'tubular' look either so i tried to boxen it a little , about the sharp edges , i've getting that a lot from many people,i'll post updates now can you point out those edges for me , thanks man.
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Alrighty man, the FIRST thing I noticed with your H2 is that the rear is a tad off. Most of the lines of the H2 run either a perfect horizontal or vertical fashion, and this is what gives it it's boxy, mean shape...For example, look at this:

http://www.pamrent.com/hummer-rear-view.jpg

What I actually think might be the problem is that maybe some of your blueprints/reference might be the H3 Hummer. Make sure you check this.

Also, your side windows shouldn't curve in to meet the roof like that. The side of the H2 is almost dead flat...well, almost flat. There is a SLIGHT curve. See here:

http://www.autointell.com/nao_compan...ar-250-212.jpg

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