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Old 01-04-2009
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Impressive work, but I have some critics :
- Put some black at the inner end of the exhaust, because it looks artificial as of now.
- Add some light aimed at your rearlights, they look too dark and you should put a bit of emphasis on the details within them.
- The trunk cover looks wavy around the license plate, do you have some clay render of it, just to be sure ?
- Also, the gap between trunk cover, rearlights and rear bumper isn't as clean as the rest of your model : width isn't constant.

Keep it us, it looks really good, I especially love the doors and the idea of combining opened doors with this point of view !
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The rest is stunning, very good! can't wait to see some renders where you actually see the interior And it would be cool to see also some hard reflections on the body!
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thanks for the crits i will fix the exhaust thingy and also i will double check the rear area to see if the seams are consistent hopefully its the lighting that giving off that illusion
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hey younglion, thanks for your comments on my work and I have to say your project is very impressive! I`ll check the thread to see what your using to render in maya
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hey younglion, thanks for your comments on my work and I have to say your project is very impressive! I`ll check the thread to see what your using to render in maya
thanks for the comment, i use mental ray for all my renders
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Very nice.
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