Go Back   Scratch Made Cars - Car Blueprints Forum > Work Area > Work In Progress: Rendering and animation

Work In Progress: Rendering and animation Show off your projects you are working on


Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
  #1 (permalink)  
Old 01-29-2007
younglion's Avatar
Carbon-Fibre Shifter
 
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Waterloo, ON
Posts: 1,016
Thanks: 5
Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
Kleeman Cl 60

This is one of my favourite cars so i decided to model it, and here is my progress so far, and it is harder to model than i thought.
Attached Thumbnails
Kleeman Cl 60-cl1.jpg   Kleeman Cl 60-cl2.jpg  
Reply With Quote
  #2 (permalink)  
Old 01-29-2007
tom120934's Avatar
Administrator
 
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: France
Age: 29
Posts: 3,552
Thanks: 174
Thanked 22 Times in 6 Posts
Looks good so far, some bumps I'm sure you can find by yourself. But the car looks great, and Kleeman cars haven't much been seen here, great choice !
__________________
Current project : Lamborghini Murcielago LP640 Roadster
Previous : Marcos 1800 GT (60's winner), Ariel Atom II (LightIsRight winner), SuperSeven (WZA #4)

See my work and my tutorials on www.thomasbaron.net
Reply With Quote
  #3 (permalink)  
Old 01-29-2007
RedStar's Avatar
1337
 
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: USA
Age: 20
Posts: 2,416
Thanks: 5
Thanked 5 Times in 1 Post
Send a message via ICQ to RedStar Send a message via MSN to RedStar
Your lights need more of a round shape. Maybe try makin a circle and then scaling it sideways to get that ovally look u want. Also your bumps on the hood that go to headlights arnt very round. They need to be more roundish and circular. Mercedes makes very complex car designs so if you are still trying to learn modeling i wouldnt suggest modeling one of these bad boys yet, especially one with a bodykit.
__________________
Reply With Quote
  #4 (permalink)  
Old 01-29-2007
younglion's Avatar
Carbon-Fibre Shifter
 
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Waterloo, ON
Posts: 1,016
Thanks: 5
Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
thanks guys, i check the headlights roundness and the bumps
Reply With Quote
  #5 (permalink)  
Old 02-05-2007
younglion's Avatar
Carbon-Fibre Shifter
 
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Waterloo, ON
Posts: 1,016
Thanks: 5
Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
redid some parts on the hood and i also worked on the side panel. there are some bumps close to the light area and, i will fix it by the next post.
Attached Thumbnails
Kleeman Cl 60-cl_comp1.jpg  
Reply With Quote
  #6 (permalink)  
Old 02-05-2007
RedStar's Avatar
1337
 
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: USA
Age: 20
Posts: 2,416
Thanks: 5
Thanked 5 Times in 1 Post
Send a message via ICQ to RedStar Send a message via MSN to RedStar
Its looking good but once the round bumps on the hood come tward the lights it gets messy. You might wana take a closer look at that.
__________________
Reply With Quote
  #7 (permalink)  
Old 02-06-2007
younglion's Avatar
Carbon-Fibre Shifter
 
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Waterloo, ON
Posts: 1,016
Thanks: 5
Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
Originally Posted by *RedStar*
Its looking good but once the round bumps on the hood come tward the lights it gets messy. You might wana take a closer look at that.
thanks, but i already said that when i posted, but it doesnt hurt to mention it. did some more work and fixed the hood, and i tried modeling the lights and this is how far i got and its still not done yet.
Attached Thumbnails
Kleeman Cl 60-cl_comp2.jpg  
Reply With Quote
  #8 (permalink)  
Old 02-06-2007
RedStar's Avatar
1337
 
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: USA
Age: 20
Posts: 2,416
Thanks: 5
Thanked 5 Times in 1 Post
Send a message via ICQ to RedStar Send a message via MSN to RedStar
Ohh ok sorry didnt read

I think you might wana finish fixing the hood up around the headlights and then youll be on your way to a badass model
__________________
Reply With Quote
  #9 (permalink)  
Old 02-06-2007
younglion's Avatar
Carbon-Fibre Shifter
 
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Waterloo, ON
Posts: 1,016
Thanks: 5
Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
Originally Posted by *RedStar*
Ohh ok sorry didnt read

I think you might wana finish fixing the hood up around the headlights and then youll be on your way to a badass model
no prob, ok ill work on the roundness, thanks.
Reply With Quote
  #10 (permalink)  
Old 02-11-2007
younglion's Avatar
Carbon-Fibre Shifter
 
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Waterloo, ON
Posts: 1,016
Thanks: 5
Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
decided to try a studio setup and also test my paint mat, crits and comments are welcome.
Attached Thumbnails
Kleeman Cl 60-cl_render1.jpg  
Reply With Quote
  #11 (permalink)  
Old 02-11-2007
RedStar's Avatar
1337
 
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: USA
Age: 20
Posts: 2,416
Thanks: 5
Thanked 5 Times in 1 Post
Send a message via ICQ to RedStar Send a message via MSN to RedStar
Your roof looks very messy.
__________________
Reply With Quote
  #12 (permalink)  
Old 02-11-2007
younglion's Avatar
Carbon-Fibre Shifter
 
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Waterloo, ON
Posts: 1,016
Thanks: 5
Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
Originally Posted by *RedStar*
Your roof looks very messy.
thats because its not done not smooth, but thanks for noticing.
Reply With Quote
  #13 (permalink)  
Old 02-12-2007
Prykie's Avatar
GPS System
 
Join Date: May 2005
Location: From Australia, Living in Edinburgh Scotland
Age: 27
Posts: 1,500
Thanks: 3
Thanked 4 Times in 1 Post
Send a message via MSN to Prykie
Front looks really smooth man, nice work
Reply With Quote
  #14 (permalink)  
Old 02-12-2007
younglion's Avatar
Carbon-Fibre Shifter
 
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Waterloo, ON
Posts: 1,016
Thanks: 5
Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
thanks man.
Reply With Quote
  #15 (permalink)  
Old 02-12-2007
feral1's Avatar
Carbon Fibre Cupholder
 
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Australia
Posts: 740
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
coming along nicely, keep up the good work.
__________________
lifes short play hard

Holden Panelvan
http://www.smcars.net/forums/work-pr...n-tuned-4.html

Torana GTR_XU1
http://www.smcars.net/forums/work-pr...a-gtr-xu1.html
Reply With Quote
  #16 (permalink)  
Old 02-12-2007
younglion's Avatar
Carbon-Fibre Shifter
 
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Waterloo, ON
Posts: 1,016
Thanks: 5
Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
thanks feral, more updates ill post some clays and wires on my next update, there are some bumps i need to work on.
Attached Thumbnails
Kleeman Cl 60-cl_render2.jpg  
Reply With Quote
  #17 (permalink)  
Old 02-12-2007
clix101's Avatar
GPS System
 
Join Date: Aug 2005
Age: 17
Posts: 2,782
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Send a message via MSN to clix101
lookin sweet
__________________
Reply With Quote
  #18 (permalink)  
Old 02-12-2007
Masakari987's Avatar
The cake is a lie!!!
 
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: Indiana
Posts: 711
Thanks: 0
Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
Send a message via AIM to Masakari987 Send a message via MSN to Masakari987
Lookin' very nice. Although something is wrong with the headlights in the angle shot on the left side of the picture.
Reply With Quote
  #19 (permalink)  
Old 02-12-2007
younglion's Avatar
Carbon-Fibre Shifter
 
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Waterloo, ON
Posts: 1,016
Thanks: 5
Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
thanks for the replies as for the headlights, its the specularity doing that, i need to tweak it some more.
Reply With Quote
  #20 (permalink)  
Old 02-13-2007
younglion's Avatar
Carbon-Fibre Shifter
 
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Waterloo, ON
Posts: 1,016
Thanks: 5
Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
clays and wires, and feel free to post some crits and comments
large image-warning
Attached Thumbnails
Kleeman Cl 60-cl_comp3.jpg  
Reply With Quote
Reply


Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.2
Copyright ©2000 - 2009, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
SEO by vBSEO 3.3.0