My Dream Camaro

[nosh_dir85]

I've been working on this car for about 2 weeks now...almost ready to call it finished, but I want to add that little something...I'm anxious to hear your opinions...

[mpfive]

you dream camero is full of rust and paint peelings?? not bad at all though

[LOST]

That,s really nice but I think that the side shape line colour is making this model strange.

[nosh_dir85]

The side shape line color? Could you be more specific?

and yea, the title is somewhat of a joke.

[LOST]

This is what I ment: I think this line should be more rusty.

[MuscleCarFreak]

I don't want to sound harsh but I wonder whether you've actually ever seen a first gen Camaro? Cause most of the body lines are totally wrong.
In case you can need some more constructive criticism:
- Seen from top, the front should be more edgy and going straight to the middle like a "V" not like this "~" kind of thing it is now
- the steps on middle height of the sides strangely hang down while they're supposed to stay on one straight level, maybe a mesh smooth problem?
- the windshield is too tall

[Niray]

Originally Posted by MuscleCarFreak

I don't want to sound harsh but I wonder whether you've actually ever seen a first gen Camaro? Cause most of the body lines are totally wrong.
In case you can need some more constructive criticism:
- Seen from top, the front should be more edgy and going straight to the middle like a "V" not like this "~" kind of thing it is now
- the steps on middle height of the sides strangely hang down while they're supposed to stay on one straight level, maybe a mesh smooth problem?
- the windshield is too tall

Let's suppose that this is DREAM Camaro

[Catlin]

why is it a mess?if its dream your mind is warped

[nosh_dir85]

Thanx for the criticism. The prints I used were pretty off, bad perspective, and I'll see if I can straighten out that line on the side, as well as the windshield.

In terms of the dirt and weathering, I find that its harder to create a worn in look than a prisitine finish.

[clix101]

Looks quite nice sofar, with the crits fixed it'll look even better keep it up

[Xoliul]

Originally Posted by nosh_dir85

In terms of the dirt and weathering, I find that its harder to create a worn in look than a prisitine finish.

Amen to that. It's a lot more fun though.

[Silent][Moebius]

the result looks very good and convincing too!

great job on the dirt and rust

[germanio]

Hey,
I agree with paint job and rusty... very cool man!

But I have little critics on model:

1º Red line: See this line, is more angular, like a Blue line.
2º Green line: This cut finish in in the rim arch.

See the link on Ebay. Having many pics of reference to help you to got a more accurate model.

eBay Motors: Chevrolet : Camaro (item 220089401381 end time Mar-13-07 08:47:45 PDT)

Keeping modeling, like your project!!

[nosh_dir85]

More texturing, and some model fixes. The windshield should look a little more accurate, and I did a little to fix the side line...although its already uvw unwrapped and I cant cut into it... I'll see what I can do about the front end tonight.

edit:/ The line I saw is correct for the 68, the 69+ has the swept back wheel arches.

[LOST]

It looks much more real, cos' before it looked like it was damaged plastic.
Really nice textures and materials.
Good job!

[Silent][Moebius]

wow outstanding dust textures on the windows and the wheels look great!

maybe the rust apttern under the hoodline is a bit too regular.

[nosh_dir85]

thanx for the comments guys...I'll see what I can do with that fender rust, and post as soon as I can...Finals at school this week.

:0

[SirDavidP]

the crease near to the front wheel arch is off... unless it's the angle of the Camera