my first car model

[mazm]

Hi guys
it's very nice to be part of this great forum.

i know it's not good one but it's my start :x
so can anyone tell me how can io solve all these problems.
thanx

[jsruk]

wellcome to the forum....what is the problem, bumps?
post your wire first

[Silent][Moebius]

not much to see, and i guess it'd be pretty hard to guess the car off that one picture

[mazm]

THANX FOR THE QUICK REPLY ....
this is AUDIR8 .... i'm trying to make the wire but i couldn't ... maybe there is something wrong.
can anyone HELP me.

thanx

[p4vlik.cz]

push printscreen on your keybord when you are looking on your model in modeling enviroment, open photoshop etc., open new file, ctrl+v, save and update here

[mazm]

i'm using ....
Tools ---> Grab Viewport it's very useful.
here is the wire for my car ..... i know it's full of mistakes but i hope to know what i did wrong to aviod next time.

thanx

[DrumBoPing]

Well thats what we are here for ! to critic and hopefully get your skills better and your model looking good

by the way for a first car that is amazing

[mazm]

really ..... this is very nice from you
so how can i solve my problems ?

thanx

[Silent][Moebius]

try to makes your wire follow the flow of the car, jsut check the attached image it should give you something to work on

[DbblGlock]

these areas might cause issues in smoothing remember to keep polies 4 sided. and small polies will cause dents, i have circled a few

[mazm]

thanx ... Silent][Moebius allowit
sorry for being late all this time ... i was out of the country.
anyway thanx a lot for your help.
i'll try to avoid these points.
but shall i continue the line which not continued. i did this becasue i'll not use it any more.

thanx