Viper PVO

thought id give this one a try,my first car model...viper has always been my fav car comments are welcomed

[NightEye]

To be really honoust, the lights and frontbumper are the things that look a bit like a Viper.. The rest is way out of proportion and things...
Nice try though

well thats why i posted it here, since people like u are experts ur suppose to let me know what kind of things are wrong and what needs to be fixed

[NightEye]

Well, look at lots of pics, to see how the basic shape looks like.. Then, when you got the basic shape, start detailing it

lol not the one im doin, its another blueprint i found here which was a Viper Competition Coupe wit PVO.... heres a pic

[NightEye]

Oh, that one
Well, try to find more pics, and use those for reference.. It should help you with the modeling :wink:

[CAH]

ok where to begin , well the a-pillar seems way to thin. The car seems way to wide or way to short in length. The rear of the car also should come out straight and not swing in like it does on yours. The front also is a bit longer than how you have it. Also you seem to be missing the air intakes on the side. To be honest the model is nice but it needs a lot of work. My best suggestion is to get lots of angle shots of this car (all angles) and just study the lines of the car. Then come back and show what youve got and I'm sure as the car progresses it will get better.

tx alot CAH, i know that this is not even close to finish,
but i thought id put it up since i just found out about
this forum a few days bak and saw all these
"post ur wips or get banned" and things like that
so i decided to post sometin up :wink: , il definately will
be workin on this more and appreciate the comments

small update, havent had anytime at all to work on it but here's what i got

[Icekid84]

hmm well from the back it looks like a great start