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Old 07-26-2007
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BMW Z4 Coupe (WIP)

Hi everyone, my nick name's Bee, this's BMW Z4 wip. I love this car so I decided made it.
Modeling by 3Ds max 8.
This's my model after 4 days, hope you like, and commend plz.
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Old 07-27-2007
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Lookin' very nice so far, but those renders are a little bit too dark. You should also add symmetry or mirror it. Tyre tread should be curved and not so boxy. Keep it goin'!
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Old 07-27-2007
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you got some pinching near the licenses plate and the the upper right part of the kidney air holes. besides that looks nice and smooth.
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Old 07-27-2007
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Thanks your comments, and these are some images of Z4.
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That tyre tread really needs more work,its such a let down for low poly tyres to be on a high poly car.Try and learn to do tyres instead of that tutorial.


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Old 07-27-2007
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Yeah, tyre so bad, I'll try.
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Old 07-28-2007
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I made another tire, hope you like. Thanks yours comments
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This is a much better tire. The car looks very nice for a Z4.. however your screenshots are really dark and hard to crit from. The shadows could hide many things.

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Old 07-29-2007
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Now tyre is lookin' much better. Keep it goin'!
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Old 07-30-2007
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And these are latest images, hope you like and comment please, thanks for your time.
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