First Car!

[Reinjan]

*First car on this forum*

Ok this is the deal, have to make a beetle in 10 days!

Lets do this!

I once made a 2CV,

Wips comming soon!

[Spline01]

next time dont post a message if you dont have anything to show...

[docmushu]

yeah man, get some progress shots up! i thought there would be some pics as well.

[Reinjan]

KK, had to start when i posted,
1 hour work

hintd and tips welcome because i'm a beginner and new to te forum

[Reinjan]

Here is the previous made car

[ChesterLM]

Why are you calling this thread 'First Car' if you have already made a previous one?

[RedStar]

Good start i guess but like chester said dont say first car.

I think people say it to attract others but i would think that it makes some people not want to even look at it. Seeing we all start off low and build up.

[Reinjan]

K i screwed up the name of my first topic , but lets focus on the work


few extra houres

[Spline01]

u basically trying to cover the blueprints with mesh, there is no accuracy, and it's very bumpy, u should start over and really focus on the details

[Reinjan]

thanx for critics, hope its getting better, and i will try and flatten the bumps



I can upload some wireframes if you want.

[LOST]

It still has got a few bumps and also headlights look a little bit too small to me.

[multimediaman]

A couple critiques:

The headlights are way too small and should be more circular

There isn't really much of a crease from the wheel arches to where they meet up with the hood... There is however a seam that goes straight down there, but the surfaces look like a continuous curve, and no fold/crease.

The bumper's and the hood's corners seem to be too sharp -- especially the hood. The outer edge should be a continuous, gradual curve


There should be no bodywork on the front wings that extrudes out to meet the lights at the bottom, only the top 3/4ths of it have that, then the bottom 1/4th is flush with the wing.

(some pics for reference)

[Reinjan]

thnx for comments and tips

[Oscar]

Originally Posted by Reinjan

I can upload some wireframes if you want.

It's u that should want to show them...lol...anyways...i guess You should try to finish that up and go to another one...U won't make it perfect couse it's Your first car....work and try to learn.Don't ask if we want to see wires...show them...it will be easier to helpGood luck...You'll need it

[Reinjan]

yeah, for wireframes should i just take a screenshot?

Latest render, missing some details and materials, plus to much lightning.


anyone has some tips on some nice vray lightning for my car?

[DrumBoPing]

not blue? lol jk, it looks good, lights need to be a bit bigger, but other than that no real complaints

[Reinjan]

K i HOpe this is a good improvement, fixed lightning, now up to some details and tomorrow is the day!!

[greenvampire]

Overall, not a bad attempt,

Crits:
the lights still need to be bigger... and round...
also, the bonnet should curve more at the edges, it seems very flat at the moment
front window looks a little odd too