BMW_X6.concept

[pedro.malheiro]

thx for the coments!! but can u post some draw to i see??
my english isnt very good

[PunkGuy]

the wire loogs nice! keep going!

[jms_3d]

nice bemer looking very clean sofar, wires seem to be very neat ish

[Erik_S]

the wire is looking good but this is the area i talked about. it seems you have a lot of tri's overthere. i should get rid of the blue lines. For the rest i didn't came up with something but you should try to loose some tri's as you have a lot of them in that area. The rest is looking nice.

[pedro.malheiro]

i guys!!

its been a long time with no updates :?...i havent time to work on it...
but now im in holiday i will continue until i finish this car...

so ther is some little update...still have things to repair...
help will be apretiated

cumps

[*Rob*]

I have attached a pic were multiple areas are marked.

I think that there are some bumps in the red area. The highlight in the yellow area looks a little bit weird. And i think that the fender in the green area isn't round enough.

But it looks really smooth to me and the wire is very clean in my mind

[tom120934]

Nice choice of car. I agree with *Rob* about the critics he spotted.

Keep us updated !

[pedro.malheiro]

hi thx...
i will fix that...the small marke in red is because it isnt finished ....and the big i dont know how to fix that...i already try to fix i it didnt work


i will fix the others...
thx for the coments

[spitty3d]

nice work so far, looks clean keep em' comin

[Erik_S]

hmm about the problem of the hard line on the side, i think it is because of the next.

It is hard to explain but i hope it will help you in the end and you understand.

If you look at the pictures with the 1, you'll notice a sharp line that will end and turnes into a smooth curve at the end.

But if you look at 2, you will notice also a sharp edge that also ends in a (smooth?) curve at the end, But there is 1 very important difference. The sharp line didn't end, it just is more spread. The polys that were close together to create a sharp line get more spread. It does not give the feeling that the edge dissapears, but just spreadens a lot.

Don't get me wrong, most of the times the way you did it is the best, But i think in this case not. As you can see on refpecs the line clearly stops there. In your model the area doesn't look right because (imo) the sharp line ends not but just give the area a bumpy sight.

I hope you understand my explenation and it workes (i can't ensure that). If you don't understand please tell me and i will try to explain it better.