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Looks really good for a two days work. I can't really critic about accuracy, as I don't know the car on the finger tips. I've just spotted a hole between front side window and the door behind it.
Please, post next time with lower JPEG compression. Your work doesn't deserve such brutality ![]() ![]() ![]() Currently project : Lamborghini Murcielago LP640 Roadster Previous : Marcos 1800 GT (60's winner), Ariel Atom II (LightIsRight winner), SuperSeven (WZA #4) See my work and my tutorials on www.thomasbaron.net |
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There is a little pinch at the very bottom of the rear pillar, close to the side window.
The bottom of the door is not that clean : the bottom vertical part of it hasn't constant height I think. Can you post a closer shot to make sure ? There are several bumps on the bumper, behind the rear wheel arch. ![]() ![]() Currently project : Lamborghini Murcielago LP640 Roadster Previous : Marcos 1800 GT (60's winner), Ariel Atom II (LightIsRight winner), SuperSeven (WZA #4) See my work and my tutorials on www.thomasbaron.net |
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I told that this is two days work and there's still much work to do and of course it includes such kind of errors. This is my style of building models: first I'm making a form and then begin to make chamfers, fix erros and so on....
There's also bump in the center of the hood, on the fender just above the arch, the pinch on the pillar is the place where few chamfers connected so I have a problem with that place yet, what about door I think its ok, it jast needs more wide chamfer around(I saw it now). Last edited by goga : 12-28-2007 at 12:12 PM. |
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I never meant you won't correct these issues, so don't take it the wrong way. My comment was just to make sure you're aware of these problems. I think an exterior eye can usually give valuable advice.
About the door, the visual comparison is excellent. Of course, there is some details still to be modeled. But the lowest vertical part I wrote about previously needs just a little bit of extra work : - Refpic shows pretty well that height is more regular than your model. - And that height should be just a little more. ![]() ![]() Currently project : Lamborghini Murcielago LP640 Roadster Previous : Marcos 1800 GT (60's winner), Ariel Atom II (LightIsRight winner), SuperSeven (WZA #4) See my work and my tutorials on www.thomasbaron.net |
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10x, will be fixed tomorrow.
![]() That's why I placed model here, I needed strong critycs, this is my dream car, I wanted to model it precisely for a long time but had not enough expirence in 3d modeling, different practice took long time and what you see here is full two days work without taking off my back from chair! Anyway thanks! |
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