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Old 04-08-2008
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A update after a while.

With the wires, one or two bad ones i noticed along the bumper.
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Nice to see you're still working on it.

You have some pinches : one on the upper corner of front fender, one on the bottom of A-pillar, one on upper corner of main front air intake. The shape of the headlight glass isn't as smooth as it could be.

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Whoa, one sharp eye you have. I cant even see them! Will fix! Thanks Heaps!
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Old 04-21-2008
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Ok, UPDATE!!! YAY!!!

Small update thou, its the headlights!
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lights looking nice man, nice details - though it looks like tha light is intersecting the top part.



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Excellent details and very good choice of a car. Keep it goin'!
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Thanks for the Crits/Comments!

@crazy 989: Yep, the lights go through the top, but i wont remove it until the lights is finished, since its easier to modify it when its a full cylinder.
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Its looking good but here are a few ways you can improve it.

Your edges dont flow evenly on the front bumper fender area. By the wheel arch to be exact. Try to get them more centerish to get that perfect result.

Next, on the fender you have some polies that are just left to form Ngons. Thats a very bad idea, get those to flow with the rest of the polies. You might also want to add more polies to the fender to get it all evened out.


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Thanks, very helpful RedStar, So heres the updated wire of the fender!

Now also update on Lights!
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NICE!!!! Now check this out, just add a line here and you will get rid of an Ngon around door handle and you will have same polyflow so reflections line up
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