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The upper outside corner of front air intake is too boxy. You should smooth the edges just a bit, IMHO.
The line between the bottom of the front bumper and the thin black part below it is weird. You should try to remodel the lower part by copying the bottom row of vertices from the bumper, then extruding it toward the ground. The beginning of the window masks has a lot of pinches. You should separate them from the body, to allow us to see how are the surfaces there. About the curve going from door to upper rear fender through lower rear fender (on the outside of the air intake) : the curvature is not continuous as it should be. Otherwise, good and pretty accurate work. Keep us updated ! ![]() ![]() Currently project : Lamborghini Murcielago LP640 Roadster Previous : Marcos 1800 GT (60's winner), Ariel Atom II (LightIsRight winner), SuperSeven (WZA #4) See my work and my tutorials on www.thomasbaron.net |
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lookin good, last render kinda dark though
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Nice modeling so far. I think it's time to add full details.
Keep it up, you're doing right ! ![]() ![]() Currently project : Lamborghini Murcielago LP640 Roadster Previous : Marcos 1800 GT (60's winner), Ariel Atom II (LightIsRight winner), SuperSeven (WZA #4) See my work and my tutorials on www.thomasbaron.net |
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looking good, i dont see any bumps good job modeling. keep it up, make sure not to overlook anything
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Paint shader is OK, the whole car looks good with it.
The brand logo on the nose isn't on the middle line of the car. The brand text on the rear wing should be scaled up in height. I hope the front turn signal repetitors are only temporary. Keep us updated, I really want to see more progress from you on this one. PS : Congratulations for your hundredth post ! ![]() ![]() Currently project : Lamborghini Murcielago LP640 Roadster Previous : Marcos 1800 GT (60's winner), Ariel Atom II (LightIsRight winner), SuperSeven (WZA #4) See my work and my tutorials on www.thomasbaron.net |
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