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Old 02-04-2008
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The upper outside corner of front air intake is too boxy. You should smooth the edges just a bit, IMHO.

The line between the bottom of the front bumper and the thin black part below it is weird. You should try to remodel the lower part by copying the bottom row of vertices from the bumper, then extruding it toward the ground.

The beginning of the window masks has a lot of pinches. You should separate them from the body, to allow us to see how are the surfaces there.

About the curve going from door to upper rear fender through lower rear fender (on the outside of the air intake) : the curvature is not continuous as it should be.

Otherwise, good and pretty accurate work. Keep us updated !



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thanks for the comments
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Old 04-29-2008
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Im switching back and forth between the R34 and the Enzo so I dont get bored here is the lastest update..

btw I cant get any carbon fiber to work
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Looks like a good start

Can you post an unsmoothed wire - the poly flow looks a little off from your smoothed wireframe in places
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here is the unsmoothed wire and the headlight render
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more renders, messing with the engine but its not going so well I dont know how you guys do it so whatever
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Worked on some more stuff windsheild and tires
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lookin good, last render kinda dark though
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Nice modeling so far. I think it's time to add full details.

Keep it up, you're doing right !



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Working on the small things. Got the tiny light in front, emblem on front side, and turn signal on back side. Will post some pics in a bit
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Oh and did I tell you how much I hate doing windows. I think ive redone them like 10 times and still had to delete them. Any ideas on how to do them right.
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Back with some of the details
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looking good, i dont see any bumps good job modeling. keep it up, make sure not to overlook anything good luck.
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Here are some more renders. I added the mirror. Also dont mind the tail lights I dont have the meterials for them yet
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Paint shader is OK, the whole car looks good with it.

The brand logo on the nose isn't on the middle line of the car. The brand text on the rear wing should be scaled up in height.

I hope the front turn signal repetitors are only temporary.

Keep us updated, I really want to see more progress from you on this one.

PS : Congratulations for your hundredth post !



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lol, thanks for all the comments. I didnt even notice 100 posts thanks. Im pretty proud about this one. Its the first one that im getting close to finishing.
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