sunburst US telecaster (Max9 & vray)

[systemb]

It's my second guitar, a telecaster in sunburst, hope you''l like it...

[et_fone_home]

Wow, Very nice details you got there. That looks superb! But how is this a WIP, looks finished to me

[systemb]

Strings are done, and the begining of my favorite effect; a fulltone full-drive mosfet pedal.... I'm not very happy with the decal I put on it, It's a blend material with a mask but it doesn't look like I woud like.....

[et_fone_home]

Wow, looking fabulous. IMO the metal on the guitar looks plastic.

[Erik_S]

the model is looking nice nothing to crit. the textures are very good, i like them a lot. But there are things that could use some work. The body looks very flat, i don't know if this particular gituar has such a flat body but most body's are a bit rounded.

Second the shaders could use some work, the metal as said before looks like plastic.

Thirth, i think it would be easy to create a bit better scene for this. Like just a wooden floor would do enough so it looks like the guitar is standing on a floor instead of just something white.

Keep it going and i'm sure you can make something nice of it

[systemb]

thank's fo the crits,
-the body is flat on this guitar, not like on a stratocaster for example,
-I'm gonna change the shaders for the chrome I need time for some test
- My idea was to put the guitar on stage with an fender deluxe amplifier, so there will be an old black wooden floor...
thank's for your comments.

[systemb]

Hi, new chrome shader test, hope it looks less plastic, what do you think ?
The fulltone is almost finished, I'm working on the material to have something like a carpaint... It's hard to find the good settings...

[Cold As Ice10129]

you should add a little space between the plate and the neck pickup so it doesnt look like its sitting on top of it. Other than that, great job, especially on the bridge.

[systemb]

The little space in the pickguard is done, other lightning test (vraysun is pretty cool.....) I like this kind of render , what do you think about ? I'm gonna finish now with modeling the interrior of the room, the amplifier,the jacks to plugg the guitar, and it would perhaps be better or more realistic with windows...
thank's for looking...

[Cold As Ice10129]

dang, that is looking good. Fender amp, blues driver pedal, and Id be set. Cant wait to see this music room.

If you ever want to do a music project just let me know.